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A little TIME AND AGAIN trade this month?
🕑 Added 2016-11-30 21:49:43 +0000 UTC Hi all,Time in this hotel has not been as good for prose writing as I had hoped, so I don't have finished a $10 exclusive story part at the moment.
I'm hoping you'll forgive me with a little trade. For a while I have been working on a TIME AND AGAIN CHAPTERS 1 & 2 collection, which puts together both of my chapters.
I also changed all the word balloons to look more normal and match what is happening in BEFORE AND AGAIN.
Oh, and because I had never been satisfied with some of the original dialogue - especially some of the character development at the start of chapter 2 - there's also lots of new text. The word bubbles are smaller, so it allowed me to work in some more stuff and also make certain parts more fun.
So I hope you'll accept this for now. I'd welcome any feedback you have about anything within the attached PDF.
Thanks,
Dan
