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🕑 Added 2022-02-27 11:57:28 +0000 UTCHello everyone,
Last week wasn't as productive as I would've liked, but this one has been much better. I've completed the new prologue and finished rewriting Chapter 1. To be honest, I wasn't looking forward too much to this revision of the 9 current chapters, but I knew this has to be done before proceeding if I wanted ORS to become the product I'm envisioning. But going over my previous work, revising and rewriting is something I don't enjoy too much... I'm eager to keep developing the story further (I enjoy keeping things new and fresh for myself) and reworking old scripts feels like a chore most of the time. Some scenes had me scratching my head, trying to find the best way to retcon or improve them, but I think the result will be worth it.
Now I'm working on revising the rest of the chapters and updating everything that has to be changed following the new beginning of the game, focusing mostly on how some information is presented, and how that affects the interactions between the characters, mainly between Ian and Lena.
Being able to go over past scenes knowing the characters like I know them now always presents new chances to portray them in a more clear and interesting way. One of the hardest things when writing the game is coming up with interesting and meaningful interactions and conversation between the characters: most of the time I only know there's a sex scene between two of them, but what's the scene or chain of events leading up to it, exactly? Where do they go, what do they do and what do they talk about? How can I make that scene interactive and create variations depending on player input, and how do I implement my stat system into those choices? Inevitably, sometimes I feel like those scenes leading up the sex scenes feel a bit hollow and formulaic, when they could pack so much character and flavour... Hopefully I can come up with better scenes and dialogues to keep ORS engaging and fresh.
My intention is to be more active posting this week: I will show you some of the art that has been re-made, similar to the last one I showed between Ian and Lena (Patreon only allows certain content in private pots, so I'm afraid I can only share it with patrons) and some other goodies.
Finally, a reminder that this month I paused the billing cycle so you won't be charged for your subscription at the start of March.
Comments
Spidey96
The open relationship route is one of my favorite routes. I can't wait for the results of the rework.
Personable Person
Normally I would say just let people hook up with multiple girls if they want, but ORS is so well-written, with such believable characters, I think it benefits from being this restrictive, and I actually don't mind replaying the game (usually I hate replaying, but I've played through ORS multiple times now). P.S. You can actually get into an open relationship with Lena, if you and Lena are both messing around on the side.
Dennis
You really disliked this? I love it. It thought maybe a little like you: "Well, why should I care only about Lena, if I want her, I can get her later on anyways, because this visual novels are all the same. They pretend to be choice-based, but give you all the girls anyhow in the end. ... well, let's try to... what is this. Not possible? Argh!" But I really like this. It makes choices matter, feels like in real life, where I cannot get all the girls at once (maybe you are better looking and irritated by this restriction ;) ) and, by this, it makes the game worth replaying not once, but twice or multiple times. Each replay with a different set of people in your "harem". So the replay is not only different in some dialougues, but is really different because you did not even knew that some possibilities existed (if not spoilered in the forum or Evas preview pictures ;) ) .
bos
My biggest hope for these rewrites is that they allow for more relaxed conditions when it comes to getting Ian and Lena officially together in the latest chapter. If you wanted that to happen, you had to pass up on quite a number scenes and choices. It felt rather restrictive.
Nicholas Phillips
I can’t wait to see all these updates and get new chapters!!! Keep up the good work Eva!!!
