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Chapter 10 weekly status report (8)
🕑 Added 2022-06-26 23:41:31 +0000 UTCQuick status update.
As always, I can't explain in too much detail what I've been working on without spoiling too much. I've been focusing on the writing maybe a bit too much, and pushing forward with that began to feel difficult, but I really wanted to make progress. I've found out it's better to switch to art related tasks when that happens, so that way I still get the feeling of pushing the workload forward and I get to clear my head for a bit. I'll do that during this coming week, focusing on writing but breaking it up to draw and edit some scenes.
Here you can see the final result of an image of Emma previously shown. What do you guys think?
Also, if you are curious about anything in particular and want to ask questions or give me tips on what to talk about in these weekly status reports, feel free to let me know in the comments. I think that way I can come up with more interesting posts to keep you informed!
Comments
Christian Schulz
One small criticism: Don't skip leg day. If the arms and upper body are much more muscular defined, so should the legs. Right now, the legs and ass and upper body seem like a merger of two different body types kept together by that perfect ass.
Christian Schulz
Emma is one of my favorite characters, though she fulfils the male fantasy almost too much. Hence the idea to make her more buff over the course of the story would make her more of an empowered character as it offsets her almost too perfect going amazaing fuckbuddy attitude. I really love the muscular look on her and I hope you keep some characters as fit as her (or even turn it up 11). Athletic with women is too often conflated with slim / anorexic so it be great to see some change here. If you were to look at inspiration for body types, have a look at Luisa Madrigal from Encanto, or real life examples: @ClaireMax on twitter or actress Gina Carano. And it be amazing to see a buff Emma rough up Ian.
