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TGCP Chapter 100: Starting Small

🕑 Added 2021-07-04 04:57:44 +0000 UTC

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Nicolas Flamel

Thanks for the chapter.

TargetDrone

yep, another great chapter. and in a way it is adorable how he unconsciously seeks support while giving it at the same time with his small desciples ;)

Oops, lmao. I'll fix that. EDIT: fixed

Alexandria Clarke

Hey @Zendran the pdf and epub for chapter 100 you uploaded is actually just 99 again

The character voice was completely wrong. Reading it over, it felt like one of those bland protagonists that you see in so many litrpgs, complete with stuck-in-your-head-syndrome and a complete ignoring of the outside world while messing with new powers. It was just...very bad. There was no funeral scene, no meeting Anna and the other kids, etc etc. There's probably only a single paragraph from the original chapter 99 that I kept between what is now chapter 99 and 100.

Matthias

Really nice chapters, as always. Out of curiosity though, what was different about the first version of chapter 99 that made you hate it so?


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