Atelier Tier, Psyche de Napoli, Group Critique (Updated)
🕑 Added 2021-05-15 12:18:20 +0000 UTCUPDATE: The video has been edited to remove all moments not pertinent to the lesson making it shorter and easier to watch.
This is the group critique stream for my Atelier Tier students. The assignment that we will be working on is the Bargue plate: Psyche de Napoli.
When: May 20th, 4pm Oslo time.
I also want to make extraordinarily clear- this critique session will focus on the challenges and lessons that the group are going through together. I will be using probably a dozen drawings, out of the 50+ that have been submitted, to point out these lessons.
Looking forward to seeing you there!
Comments
Kimberly
Thank you for such an informative critique! I am a newbie here on your Patreon but learned so much just watching this before I start my first Bargue plate.
michael joshua
also i just noticed now that when you were explaining about slicing the top of the forehead and looking down on it to see the soft turn of its form that the top of the bargue itself is already slicedXD
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Yep. Deconstruct the curve using straight lines and build the specific subtlety over time.
michael joshua
hi stephen on the topic of straight lines and angle breaks aside from allowing us to carefully analyze the angles of a particular line segment but it also allows us to express more the character and gesture of it? so its like were simplifying it by using straight lines and angle breaks but by then were also expressing its true character more?
Stephen Bauman Artwork
The 1st term is 3 projects: https://www.patreon.com/posts/atelier-tier-its-47824270 After that there will be many more terms- not sure how many yet.
Francesco
Hello Stephen, thank you for this great video. I would like to try to organize myself as best I can to follow this program and I was wondering how many semesters the atelier will last, and what kind of exercises we will tackle later. Thanks!
Chi
Hi Stephen, this was an outstanding exercise (so as other your lessons). Thank you!
Roberto Romero
Hope mine gets chosen for critique next time
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Best of luck with your treatment, Pamela! All of the content will be here for you once you're back at it!!
pamela b.
Hey Stephen, I just wanted to send you a quick note. I am currently undergoing cancer treatment (localized Melanoma) in the form of immunotherapy, the side effects which are requiring me to take prednisone, which in turn, is having a very interesting effect on my vision. Until I can taper off this prednisone, I will not be doing much art, because I’m not seeing very well, but I just wanted to let you know I’m going to continue to support your channel I love everything you do and I can’t wait to get back to drawing with you. Thank you
Stephen Bauman Artwork
I've just attached it to this post at the bottom.
Stephen Bauman Artwork
You're welcome!
Kate
This is so helpful and informative, thank you!
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Same here!
Louise Notley (lulunot1)
I wanted to say the critiques were really excellent Stephen - sensitive but direct, and I think no matter what stage we are at personally we learned a lot from this session. I do hope everhyone sticks with it so we can see 120 or more Belvederes in June!
Juliana Bohn
Thank you Stephen, your critique was just the thing I needed to help me move forward! I am looking forward to the Belvedere torso with great trepidation 😢 where do we find the source image?
Kylie Mackay
Great critique - Thank you, as you were talking I was looking at my drawing like uh oh! I learnt a great deal it was an eye opener and now I want to go back and fix my drawing.
Kelley Hails
Awesome information- I now have questions to ask myself along the way. Learned so much. Thanks! Also, I loved the presence of the fern and Lao Tzu.
korsiak3185
The critique was great. It felt like being actualy at school except one that i want to be in. Thank you Stephen!
Caroline Cheng
Thanks a million for your critique!!
Lynda Backman
I’m glad to hear that you’re going to address photographing work! I really need it. Thanks for everything once again really enjoyed this live session!
Lynda Backman
Working for me 👍
Kate Simpson
Looking and sounding good here. 👍
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Tweets to tweet :)
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Thanks Pamela! You got a full on smile/laugh out of me with this comment. See you in the crit ;)
pamela b.
This approach of taking on a global critique is so wise and effective. Many critique videos go through one by one, the same info, the same mistakes, the same tips - come on...we've got lives to live, tweets to tweet. Repetition to hit the high points, but enough. You are a star in my book. I appreciate all that you are putting out here.Full Marks!!
Stephen Bauman Artwork
Yes :)
Caroline Cheng
It is 5/14/2021 in Los Angeles, can I still submit it