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Chapter 115- Night Attack

🕑 Added 2018-09-11 11:01:00 +0000 UTC

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Simon Macdonald

Start of the chapter feels a bit clunky to read and not up to the usual standards.

ForestRage

Thanks for the suggestion. Done! :)

Mackoy

I think a faint line to separate Chu’s dream from the scene before would help ease the transition. Apart from that, the chapter was great. Ming is a threat lol

Chawki89

Haha, nice name for the goblin raid leader!


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