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Chapter 148-Extending one's reach

🕑 Added 2018-12-12 11:01:00 +0000 UTC

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ForestRage

Not yet. Wait for it...

Deinos

Ah I just realized, shouldn't Lucy be able to smell and otherwise perceive if someone is attracted/aroused to someone else? Here it'd obviously be to Miki but earlier on there should've been some occasions where Chu showed interest in her.

ForestRage

Thank you for the help!

Mackoy

Lol Lucy dragging Miki for some personal girl talk hahahaha These are all the typos I found: witness[ed] No[t] that passage. If [it] wasn't for you In the darkness[,] kept only at The unexpected attack[,] from the darkness the old man [slapped] -> [slapping] his flaming beard I'm honestly amazed with how clean your writing is compared to some others I have proofread o.o


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