Don't do this too often
🕑 Added 2024-01-06 23:53:59 +0000 UTCBut, I'm a little nervous about this last chapter.
I think the GodEater system is needed for my finale, and to make Symphony work with my future plans. But, maybe it's too soon?
Basically, I'm feeling uncomfortable because I'm not sure if I did this chapter right, and I'm curious about what you guys think. You know the story just as well as me, did this feel off, and if so, why?
Comments
Wanderer
As long as you explain everything in the next chapter, the issue with it being too soon can be fixed.
Joshua David Mullenary
it's likely that I'll split the chapter
Joshua David Mullenary
Good notes.
Jeremy Young
I think that killing a god, even a lesser one, needs more build-up than a couple of paragraphs. I hardly paid attention to the gods that were not in an active conversation with Walker and to execute him so quickly is a little rushed. We never had a chance to start to hate him before he was dead
Jeremy Young
No need to gather evidence the system already records everything.
Baron of Awesome
Might need to put him in prison first to gather evidence
Baron of Awesome
Might be funny if they did a phoenix write style court case and the rule an execution.
