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Chapter 77: A Mortal Problem

🕑 Added 2024-03-24 21:46:39 +0000 UTC

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Joshua David Mullenary

That's 2. I'll look at editing it.

Lerati

It’s a bit strange and I don’t fully understand what happened. I do read Ar’Kendrithyst though, so I’m used to Time Magic wackiness.

Joshua David Mullenary

Yeah, I worry I have too many arcs and fluff hitting at once. It would've been interesting to have a section just for them, but instead, they get to colonize Fortis. It'll work out. Thanks for the love of my design! Did the manipulation of time seem a bit confusing?

Lerati

I’m kind of sad they ended up attacking first. I feel like that could’ve added an additional conflict for Walker. Then again, it might conflict with or add clutter to future arcs. I’m no writer, so you shouldn’t give too much weight to this comment. Love the designs for the Crystal Nomads btw.

Joshua David Mullenary

I'll note it down. If anyone else agrees, please let me know.

Jeremy Young

A little confusing when he started manipulating time but other than that,TFTC


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