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Writing Style - Feedback
🕑 Added 2021-11-18 12:01:01 +0000 UTCSo by now there are a few stories out there and I am wondering what people's thoughts are regarding the narrative style I use.
Mandy is written in 1st person: I walked towards her and grab her by the waist
Hungry is written in Forced perspective: You walk towards her and grab her by the waist
Currently I've not written anything in 3rd person: Ricardo walked towards her and grabbed her by her waist
Just a bit of background, Forced perspective was my default writing style and it came naturally, not sure why? but it is what came easiest to me. 1st isn't much of a change so that is also fine
3rd person is something that I have tried and I wasn't the best at it, kept making grammatical errors etc.
This Poll will be ongoing as hopefully more people sign up so that everyone can have their say
