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Next side story
🕑 Added 2021-11-21 20:58:21 +0000 UTCI always keep forgetting to make this poll earlier...
Anyway, I removed Lyle's Yearning because I'm not sure where I want to go with it anymore. I was thinking that it should be from the time before his Interlude, but there's not much interesting to explore there, so maybe I should shift it into a nerdy exploration of computers set after he goes to Escanso, but I'm not sure if I have the mind for it right now.
I've added the choice to expand The Leviathan's story because I felt it deserves more than just three chapters for everything I wanted to tell.
I've also added the choice to review the girls' Origin stories because some of them suffer from the same problems as the early chapters (bad grammar and lack of details, though one or two are missing some important details). Once the reviewing completes (if it doesn't take too long and I'm forced to change midway), I'll make them public as I want to one day for all readers to be able to enjoy them.
Since I'm already adding expansion options, the Origin stories are also good choices for expansion, but I think I first need to fix all the worse stories before I start expanding them.
And finally, I haven't had the time to write Geneseed (a second novel I've started) anymore, but I think it's fair to put it here if you guys are interested in reading more of it.
