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Random Screentone practice [D. Va]

🕑 Added 2016-09-01 14:19:26 +0000 UTC

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Thanks so much Deviant as always! I'll do my best *w*

DeviantHunter

Great job on D.VA! She's definitely one of my favorite characters from Overwatch! :D While I can't really comment on the many topics regarding art I will say that your line work is really good and I like it. Just keep trying different techniques until you feel satisfied. Also Br0kenEng1ish makes good points. Anyway awesome work Puff! ^_^

Thank you!!! I'll definitely consider lighter tones owo b I think you got a good eye there!

JOzza1302

Love butts B) But I think your lines are fine, just maybe don't do such dark backgrounds and they will look more defined perhaps? Or even a while outline around your characters in dark backdrops, just spit balling here but I personally think your current line lines really define your work and make it look more unique. Honestly, I work with mostly think lines and I wish I could make lines like yours work for my stuff ^^ EDIT: Honestly all I can really suggest is maybe fading the grey out more a little around the character, not even by that much. It looks fine, but if your worried about line definition that would be my best advice.