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343 - Sacrifices

🕑 Added 2019-11-15 14:22:02 +0000 UTC

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0x0F

Neo man, the last few chaps are just a repeat of Blackhawk down. Knew who was going to die even before you wrote it, was just wondering how long till they died. Even though I liked Drake and Kont as soon as the helo went down, knew they were dead men walking. Feel like you were missing something in these last few chaps.

Chris

A bit too close to black hawk down.

Aboszor

I didn't want tragedy in this, but goddamn, when it hits hard you know it's damn good writing. Besides, in war it's unrealistic that everybody survives anyways so idk what everyone expected...

Pagemaster

Which idiots wanted tragedy? It sure as hell wasn't me. I hate tragedy and dont like reading it. Tragic things can happen as long as it isnt to characters I like. l personally like Disney endings.

Not Greg!


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