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Rewriting the Arc

🕑 Added 2019-11-21 03:34:30 +0000 UTC

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Thundermike00

Why do they have to die at all? Also the whole convoy not making it was overuse as well.

I sorta basing this part on BHD ... but i guess it was too predictable and overused I guessed... so I decided to scrap the 2nd half of it and rewrite something else

Thundermike00

I actually liked the goblin sad to see him died.

Thundermike00

What made you think it should be rewritten?

While many will complain, I personally am all for it. Dedication is important to your readers so take your time.


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