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401 - A Coming Storm

🕑 Added 2020-03-30 01:26:15 +0000 UTC

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Louis Delorme

Have you heard about the steam ball? Its a very primitive steam engine. But more than that its light and spins very quickly for a steam engine. Perfect for a lighter than air balloon!

I don't mind, theres many things I dont know about... and I do use my own experiences to write out the story.

Ashley Scott

I hope you don’t mind my comments I just wanted to give you some real world experience About things that most people don’t think about Unless they have actually experienced them. And lighter than air aircraft are a bit of a passion of mine and I didn’t wanna come off too strong your military stuff has been completely on point and I’m Enjoying your story tremendously. And I hope somebody picks it up and says this would make a magnificent anime because it would

hmmm... i did have written something similar to a jet nozzle using pressurized steam for quick propulsion. As for keeping the boat steady, I probably add in a magic field of sorts to keep the ship somewhat stable... no worries, lots of room to explore, since its steamworks n magic! hehehe

Ashley Scott

You already have them steam powered you could just point the steam nozzles to the back and the steam escaping at high pressure would propel the balloons, like a jet engine just not as fast. Maneuverable balloons must be basically fish shaped otherwise they tend to spin much like a round boat with one ore. Also a balloon in a storm can change height I several thousand feet in a few seconds because of massive updrafts and downdrafts it would be terrifying but as long as you’re tied down or have something holding you to the deck you wouldn’t be injured. But there would be a lot of screaming. It be a lot like riding a roller coaster standing up or like the airplane they use to train astronauts for zero gravity people who have been through the training refer to it as the vomit comet.

thanks for the input, didnt really know about this =D dont worry, there will be slave powered propellers using bicycle like contraptions to power air ship movements XD

Ashley Scott

I only have one criticism. as a hot air balloonest. Balloons cannot work with sails. There is no wind To use The balloon moves with the air in the direction the air travels no manner of sails changes the direction it goes the speed it goes in anyway shape or form you cannot tack A balloon the only way to change direction is to go up or down into a Windstream it is going a different direction and that’s it. Sailing ships can do this because of the friction of the boat body in the water there’s no friction in the air at least not enough to make sails work. A lighter than air aircraft must have propulsion is the only way that it can be navigated. A magic system could overcome this but it would require some spell to put an outside force on the balloon which seems to me to be less efficient than creating some sort of blower that pushes the balloon. And if that outside force was attached to the ship and blowing into sails it’s still wouldn’t work well the air was flowing into the sail the Force of the air moving out of the blower Would cancel out the power. Feel entirely free to ignore me it’s just a personal annoyance

if it is easily available!

too much backlash from the starting of book 2... i rather not face that shit again and increase my blood pressure...

Louis Delorme

You began the book differently

Chris

Aetherium is a broken system. They are totally going to abuse it.


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