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634 - Not the Time

🕑 Added 2021-08-15 14:31:51 +0000 UTC

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😂😂😂👌 oh brother good one

Chris

I am waiting for when Prince Najja gets slapped down by his father. Of course, if you want to go the cliche predictable route you would have the king assassinated in some way by his brother and blame it on the 2nd prince for bringing in Dr Sharone. I honestly hope that trope isn't repeated here. Do something more honorable. The king gets better but not completely then gathers more ships and rides into battle to defend his nation. Maybe even go through with the trope of the brother assassinating him with poison except the nanites counteract the poison and the king strikes down his brother while he is monologing about his victory over the king. That would be some good misdirection in the plot from what everyone is expecting. From there before the battle, he can reaffirm his decision of successor or it can be left ambiguous to stir up conflict for succession. I am pretty sure you are planning to kill him off but it would be better if he died in battle instead of in bed.

Third prince: what do you think sky general? Sky general: they outnumber us 12:1 Third prince: any suggestions? Sky general: only one Third prince: tell me Sky general: we call in the avengers Third prince: really? Sky general: yes the iron kingdom shall call in iron man

Thundermike00

Now sky general starting to think more highly of the prince Herod then the prince he was assigned with helping.


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