tigerknight
patreon
S&S party crashers 2016 - page 1 draft
🕑 Added 2016-11-30 12:50:51 +0000 UTC Hey folks!Here's the first draft of the party crashers comic, page one! After thumbnailing the story arc, I've settled on 8 pages (not 6). There are roughly 80 characters total, so I will draw 10 per page.
The following supporters are featured on this page, and I'd love to have feedback if you have anything you'd like to change, or are fine with what's drawn:
(In case Patreon resizes the image, here's the original version: https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/1277823/contrib-2016_002-20161130.jpg )
Panels 1-4: The world suddenly tips sideways.
Panel 5: Everything begins tumbling out of the castle. The messenger, the King, Rainy and Cookies the dragon, a guard, the royal children in a bathtub, as well as:
- Rei Loire: just fallin'
- Vandal: flapping his arms
- Cosmo: daytime astronomer with telescope
- Henry K9: in the middle of meditation
- Tom Redlion: in the middle of lunch (nomming two turkey legs)
Panel 6: The baker hangs on to his bread.
- Mishafox: the baker's assistant
- Jenna: just fallin', with groceries
Panel 7: The drunk blacksmith and his blades go flying out of the smithy.
- Southpaw Fox: a house painter, on a ladder
- Tanabi: shaking a guard, as always
- EJ Husky: hanging onto a wine barrel
I will begin coloring this on Friday; please send your feedback before then :)
Comments
Jan
I find it funnier when flight-capable characters don't fly when they need to ;) Henry K9 is meditating and the blacksmith is drunk as usual.
Panther
I see Rain in the upper of the first panel , but her dragon isn't flying ? And what about this zen guy in the downer of ? Then the blacksmith quietly drinking in the last panel ? XD
Panther
What an heavy bird ^_^"
