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🕑 Added 2020-08-23 16:58:29 +0000 UTC
“Baby Overload”
PART 2:
ARTIST @BOOM970
Panel One – Frame: Jamal and Becky both looked shocked as their driving home. Both are wide eyed.
Jamal: “I wasn’t expecting that.”
Becky: “Me neither…what are we going to do?”
Jamal: “Well I guess I will increase advertising for the gym so we can drum up more business.”
Becky: “We have plenty in savings so don’t panic.”
Panel Two – Frame: Showing Becky’s stomach with the seat belt barely able to fit her.
Jamal: “We will be one BIG happy family so I’m not worried…I think.”
Becky: “It had to be those pills, we tried for years and then THIS happened.”
Panel Three – Frame: Jamal’s face is wide eyed and sweaty as he’s driving home.
Becky: “Where are those pills anyway? I haven’t been able to find them.”
Jamal: “I umm…threw them away over a month ago.”
Becky: Okay good we don’t need to have any more after I deliver this litter.”
Panel Four – Frame: Jamal’s crotch showing the outline of his bulge.
Becky: “They don’t seem to have warn off you’re still so HUGE and I saw that cum mess you made in the bathroom. You missed the toilet a bit Jamal.”
Jamal: “Sorry about that I didn’t want to turn on the light and wake you up.”
Panel Five - * Flash Back* Frame: Shows Jamal with his eyes closed grunting as he cum’s and blasts all over the toilet. His dick is swollen, and his balls are big.
Narration bubble: “I can’t let her think I’m still taking those pills. But the truth is they’re kind of addicting, they make me feel so thick and big and I took them one time when I was working out and I swear I could feel my muscles growing.”
Narration bubble: “And the feelings of cumming is euphoric. I’ve know I should throw them away but…I cant.”
Panel Six – Frame: Becky is walking towards their house waving at Jamal.
Becky: “By sweetie, love you!”
Jamal: “Love you too! I have a new client today so I will be home a little late tonight.”
· END PAGE ONE
Panel One – Frame: * Shows the outside of Pumped Up Fitness*
Panel Two – Frame: * Jamal and one of his employees standing behind a reception desk. The logo for Pumped Up Fitness is behind them. Both men are wear company muscle shirts *
Jamal: “So yeah Dan I don’t know what to do, but don’t get me wrong I’m super happy about it.”
Dan: “If you say so boss…but my God that’s a lot of kids! How did she get pregnant with so many?”
Jamal: “I had…gotten lucky I guess.”
Panel Three - * A super hot woman walks in the door *
Woman: “I’m looking for Jamal, I have a four o’clock appointment with him.”
Jamal: “That’s me ma’am. Let’s get started.”
Woman: Great! Can we start with my chest? I really want to tone up.”
Panel Four – Frame: * The woman is lying down on the bench getting ready to lift, Jamal is staring at her big tits. *
Panel Five – Frame: *An aroma is coming off of Jamal and going into the air, the woman smells it and hearts are in her eyes. *
Jamal: Are you ready ma’am?
Woman: I sure am BIG boy
Panel Six – Frame: The woman is looking upwards and can see Jamal’s massive bulge peeking under his shorts (wearing underwear)
· END PAGE TWO
Panel One – Frame: * The woman is all sweaty and has sweat all over her big tits making them shiny
Woman: “Am I doing good?”
Jamal: “Yes…perfect actually.”
Woman: “Good I hope the next workout is harder, don’t go easy on me I can take it.”
Panel Two – Frame: * show the aroma from Jamal going into the woman’s nose and to her brain, with an x-ray of her ovaries going into hyper ovulation *
Woman: “I need something harder!”
Jamal: “I have just the idea.”
Panel Three – Frame: * The woman is doing squats and notices Jamal’s bulge grow and is shocked by its size*
Jamal: I need to run to my office for a quick second and…grab something.”
Panel Four – Frame: Jamal is in his office with his pants down looking at his bulge. He’s wearing pocketed underwear and they have torn and his big balls are sticking out of them a little.
· Jamal looks panicked
· Then the woman busts open the door in a lustful rage
Panel Five - Frame: Jamal’s back is still turned to the woman
Woman: “Listen here you hunk! I don’t know what it is about you but I need you RIGHT NOW!”
Jamal: “Miss now is not the best time…I can’t help you with that.”
Woman: “Okay fine then! Just so you know I’m an influencer on LifeStalker and if you don’t give me what I want I can promise you no one will come here.”
Panel Six – Frame: Jamal angerly looks at his desk and there’s an x-ray of the pills in his desk.
Jamal: “And if I fuck you?”
Woman: “Then I will tell all my followers how amazing this place is!”
Jamal: “Fine”
· END PAGE THREE
Panel One - Frame: Jamal takes a pill (split frame ) his dick almost rips the underwear fully.
Jamal: “Come over here and lay down on the desk.”
Panel Two – Frame: Jamal pulls down the womans yoga pants and his hard on is about to erupt
Jamal: “Just remember to write a good review…and that you asked for this.”
Panel Three – Frame: Jamal starts shoving his dick into her and it barely fit but he keeps going deeper anyway. The woman is struggling to take it but still has hearts in her eyes.
Panel Four – Frame: Jamal’s dick is making a huge bulge in her stomach
Panel Five – Frame: His dick and balls get bigger and veiny
Panel Six – Frame: Jamal is fucking the shit out of the woman
· END PAGE FOUR
Panel One – Frame: Cum shot and cum inflation
Panel Two – Frame: Second cum shot and more inflation
Woman: “Oh God I don’t think I can take much more.”
Jamal: “Too bad I’m nowhere near being done yet!”
Panel Three – (Half panel): Jamal’s muscles grow / does the standing sex position
Panel Four – (Half panel): cum shot and inflation / jamals balls shrink
Panel Five – Frame: x-ray of her womb being bombarded with sperm and getting fertilized
Panel Six – Frame: Jamal is laying on the floor exhausted and the woman laying on the desk bloated with cum and exhausted as well.
· END PAGE FIVE
Panel One – “A few hours later”
Panel Two - Frame: Jamal wakes up dazed and confused and the woman is gone
Panel Three – He looks down at his dick and balls and see’s that they’ve gotten a little bigger.
Jamal: “Oh my head…what happened? Wait there was a lady here…did that really happen or was I dreaming?”
Panel Four – Frame: Jamal put on his shorts and they don’t properly fit because of his new size
Jamal: “I need to go home and grab some better fitting clothes.”
Panel Five – Frame: * Looking through a pair of binoculars at jamals junk as he’s leaving the building *
Unknown person: “I see that the experiment was a success with results that were beyond our expectations.”
Panel Six – Frame: The doctor from the previous comic is in the back of a van with the woman Jamal had sex with . There is a whole bunch of equipment in the van like spy gear. The woman is sitting in a chair still bloated with cum.
Doctor: “How are you feeling agent 069?”
Woman (agent 069): “Like I’m about to burst.”
· END PAGE SIX
Panel One – Frame: Jamal is taking a shower and is looking down at his dick and balls
Thought bubble: “I can’t keep doing this! These pills are insane I know that couldn’t have been a dream. I don’t think my junk will return to how it was before all of this.”
Panel two – Frame: Shows Jamal’s body, he’s a bit more muscular looking than before.
Thought bubble: “I swear I felt my muscles grow and I felt so strong holding her up like that.”
Panel Three – Frame: Jamal is out of the shower and Becky is in the bathroom wearing a shirt that barely fits her.
Becky: “You’re home early is everything okay?”
Jamal: “Oh hey honey…yeah everything is okay I just wanted to get some new clothes.”
Becky: “Okay…wow Jamal you’ve really been working out hard. I didn’t notice how big and sexy my hunk has gotten.
Panel Four – Becky see’s Jamal’s junk
Becky: “I really didn’t notice how big you were.”
Panel Five – Frame: Becky looks at Jamal suspiciously as he’s getting dressed to go back to the gym.
Jamal: “Okay honey I have to get back to the gym…Love you.”
Becky: “Mhm…I will send you a text of some stuff I want you to get before you come home.”
Panel Six – Frame: Becky’s stomach is growling and she looks down at it surprised
Belly: “feed us!”
· END OF PAGE SEVEN
Panel One – Frame: Jamal is back at the gym and there’s a large crow of people on the gym floor surrounding someone. Dan is behind the desk in shock and awe.
Jamal: “What’s going on over there?”
Dan: “Monster Mike is in town!”
Jamal: “You’ve got to be kidding me.”
Panel Two – Frame: Jamal makes peaks over the crowd and see’s a huge body building bench pressing a lot of weight.
Panel Three – Frame: Monster Mike is standing up and flexing his muscles, people are cheering and girls have hearts in their eyes.
Monster Mike: “Six hundred pounds baby! I’m going to win this thing!”
Panel Four – Frame: Monster Mike notices Jamal in the crowd
Monster Mike: “Jamal is that you? I’ll be damned.”
Jamal: “Here we go” (he whispers)
Panel Five – Frame: Monster Mike and Jamal are talking
Monster Mike: “Funny running into you here.”
Jamal: “I own this place…I could say the same thing.”
Monster Mike: “A little guy like you running a place like this?”
Jamal: “ … “
Monster Mike: “Well they’re holding the new Mister Galaxy bodybuilding competition in a few weeks a few miles from here. With you owning a gym I’m surprised you didn’t know that.”
Panel Six – Frame: Monster Mike is pointing to his Ferrari outside the window.
Monster Mike: “I know you saw that bad boy out there. I’m a three time winner and I plan on buying another one when I win again.”
Jamal: “Good for you mike.”
· END PAGE EIGHT
Panel One – Frame: Monster Mike is giving Jamal and knuckle sandwich (annoyingly rubbing his knuckles on his head causing Jamal to be aggravated)
Monster Mike: “It’s not like school anymore I don’t want your lunch money!”
Jamal: “Mike get off of me!”
Monster Mike: “Alright little bro I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings.”
Panel Two – Frame: Jamal is looking mad at Monster Mike while he’s taking a selfie with some ladies and flexing his muscles.
Monster Mike: “To help you out a bit I will pay for a year membership here…you can keep the change.”
Panel Three – Frame: Monster Mike is looking at Jamal flexing his upper body
Monster Mike: “If you think you can take on the Monster! You let me know bro and we can have a lift off right now bro!”
Jamal: “Yeah! Let’s do it! Right now!”
Panel Four – Frame: Shows a small montage of them lifting weights and Monster Mike keeps out lifting him.
Panel Five – Frame: Jamal looks exhausted as Monster Mike flexs while people take pictures of him.
Monster Mike: “If you think you’re up for some squats you let me know bro.”
Panel Six – Frame: ( three split panel)
· Frame one: Jamal says, “I will be right back”
· Frame two: Jamal has another pill in his hand
· Frame three: flash back of his muscle growth and strength
· END OF PAGE NINE
Panel One – Frame: Jamal is standing in the doorway looking ready to workout, the pills aroma is coming off of him.
Jamal: “You ready…little man?”
Panel Two – Frame: Monster Mike is loading weights onto the squat bar.
Monster Mike: “Five hundred pounds should be easy to start off with.”
Panel Three – Three split frame:
· Jamal is struggling to squat
· His muscles get stronger
· He completes the lift and Monster Mike looks shocked
Panel Four - Frame: Jamal and Monster Mike are standing next to each other doing dumbbell curls and Jamal is doing the same weight as him. Show another weight lifting montage.
Panel Five – Frame: While Jamal and mike and lifting the woman can smell the aroma from Jamal and it’s making them horny.
Panel Six – Frame: Jamal is standing in front of Monster Mike who is bent over and exhausted.
Jamal: “Tired already? I was just getting started.”
Monster Mike: “That’s…that’s…impossible.”
· END PAGE TEN
Panel One – Frame: Jamal is taking a shower and Monster Mike’s shadow is behind him through all the steam.
Monster Mike: “How the fuck did you out lift me!?”
Panel Two – Frame: Jamal turns around and looks at Monster Mike smugly
Jamal: “Easy answer I’m all muscle and you’re just a big water balloon.”
Panel Three – Frame: Jamal see’s Monster Mikes dick size and he’s much smaller than Jamal
Jamal: “Little man.”
Panel Four – Frame: Monster Mike is pointing at Jamal angrily with his fists balled.
Monster Mike: “You’re on some crazy shit you liar. I literally saw your bicep swell up when you were lifting…that shit ain’t normal bro!”
Jamal: I just have good creatine.”
Panel Five – Frame: Monster Mike leaves angrily
Monster Mike: “Fuck you I will see you later and I will know what you’re taking little…I mean Jamal!”
Panel Six – Frame: Another figure comes up from behind Jamal while he’s turned around
Jamal: “Back for more already?”
· END PAGE ELEVEN
Panel One – Frame: Four women appear behind Jamal and his back is still turned and his face is shocked when the four women speak.
Woman one: “I couldn’t help myself for some reason seeing you lift like that.
Woman two: “Me neither.”
Woman three: “God I’m so wet
Woman four: “Fuck me first PLEASE!”
Panel Two – Frame: Jamal’s dick gets massively hard and his balls grow huge
Jamal: No…not again…I’m so…horny!”
PANELS 4 – 6 – Are all sex with the four women with belly inflations. Can you make those split panels?
· END PAGE TWELVE
Panel One – Frame: (Meanwhile) Show Monster Mike sneaking around Jamals office
Panel Two – Frame: Mike finds Jamal’s pills in his desk drawer and is reading them
Monster Mike: “Well, well…what do we have here?”
Panel Three – Frame: Mike takes a few of the pills and puts them into his pocket
Panel Four – Frame: Jamal is in the locker room and looks exhausted, you can see the women in the background laying on the shower floor bloated with cum. One of them is attempting to stand up. Jamal’s phone is vibrating in the locker.
Panel Five – Frame: Jamal looks at his text message from Becky
Text: “WE ARE HUNGRY WHERE ARE YOU!!!? YOU SHOULD HAVE BEEN HOME HOURS AGO!!”
Panel Six – Frame: You can see the silhouette of Jamal running out into the parking lot to his car, it’s night time
Jamal: “Oh shit! Oh shit! Oh shit!”
END
PART 3:
ARTIST @NIKOBUNBUN
· PLOT: Jamal and Becky have been trying to have a baby for a few years. Becky brings home some pills that she got from a “doctor” that causes Jamal’s dick and balls to grow and he cum’s 1,000x normal. They conceive multiples. Fast forward and Jamal is still taking the pills because it makes him feel amazing and he likes the feeling they give him. Jamal also doesn’t know that he releases a scent that makes women uncontrollably horny for him and forces ovulation. The two of them own a gym and Jamal’s old school bully comes over and is a bodybuilder. The two of them have a lifting competition and Jamal wins by cheating and taking the pills and “Muscle Mike” notices his small muscle growth. While Jamal is messing around with a woman he doesn’t know that Mike has snuck into his office and found the pills and stole some of them.
PAGE ONE:
PANEL ONE (SPLIT): *Muscle Mike is working out doing the bench press and his muscles are bulging and veiny*
“Oh my god yes, I feel so amazing! Yes! YEESS!”
PANEL (SPLIT): *Show a shadow against the wall of Mike flexing his massive muscles*
PANEL TWO: *Jamal returns home with bags of food for Becky* (Kentucky Fried Vegetables, Carrot King and WhatACarrot)
“Becky…sweetheart…I got your food” Jamal says while cowering in fear.
PANEL THREE: *Becky snatches the food from him and begins devouring it like an animal* (She’s hungry because Jamal was supposed to get her food hours ago but he was “busy”)
PANEL FOUR: *Becky is shoveling food in her mouth and Jamal is shocked as he sees her belly growing and is about to bust out of her pajama’s*
Becky, “We’re so hungry!!!”
PANEL FIVE: *Jamal is now sitting next to Becky on the couch thinking, she’s in a food coma. Her belly is huge and busted out of her pajamas and she has food all over her. Jamal’s phone gets a notification.*
Jamal thought bubble, “oh crap I really fucked that woman…why did I do that? I couldn’t control myself. What’s happening to me?”
PANEL SIX: *Jamal looks at his phone*
The text message reads, “I know you’re secret meet me at Hoppers in two hours or I’m snitching!”
PAGE TWO:
PANEL ONE: Scene – Hoppers is a strip club, there are strippers everywhere. Have an arrow pointing to Jamal in the crowd.
PANEL TWO (SPLIT):
ONE: *Muscle Mike is standing behind Jamal as he sits at his table*
Mike, “Hey little bunny!”
TWO: *Jamal turns around and is startled by how massive and muscular Mike is and screams.*
PANEL THREE: * Mike gets in Jamal’s face. Some of the strippers in the background are looking in shock and lust at the two of them*
“I found out your not so little secret shrimp”
“I…I don’t know what you mean.”
“You know damn well what I mean. I want more of those pills! TONIGHT!”
PANEL FOUR: * Jamal looks more sternly at Mike and is in his face as well now.”
“Or what will you do Mike?”
“I’m going to tell everyone…and I mean everyone. It wouldn’t be good for business if people knew you could take pills instead of having a gym membership. Now would it?”
“You bastard. No one will believe you.”
“Let’s find out then.”
PANEL FIVE: *Jamal and Mike start getting surrounded by strippers who smell their aroma*
Mike, “Better yet little bunny. If you can fuck more girls than me I won’t say a word.”
“Fine and you will lose too, asshole!”
PANEL SIX: *Mike has his hand out with two pills in them*
“I’ll make it more fun. One for me and one for you.”
PAGE THREE
PANEL ONE: *Jamal and Mike are sitting on a couch with horny girls in front of them*
PANEL TWO: *A shot of Jamal and Mike’s dick and balls are out, their both huge and veiny. But Mike is a bit bigger*
“My God how many did you take Mike!?”
“All of them. Not only am I going to win that competition I’m going to take you down little bunny!”
PANEL THREE: *Scene of multiple strippers holding and licking both of their dicks.*
PANEL FOUR: *One stripper is riding Mike cowgirl style and Jamal is doing missionary to another, both have bulging stomachs*
PANEL FIVE (SPLIT): *Cum inflations for both Mike and Jamal*
PANEL SIX (SPLIT) *One stripper is chugging Miks cum while Jamal has another one against the wall, her belly is swelling up from cum*
PAGE FOUR
PANEL ONE – THREE: Sex and inflation
PANEL FOUR: *Mike looks dizzy and sweaty while a stripper is riding him*
“Oh yeah there was something I forgot to mention mike. Those pills make you a little loopy.”
PANEL FIVE: *Mike faints while filling a stripper*
“I guess that means I win”
PANEL SIX: *The entire vip room is full of stripper laying out all over the place with cum inflated bellies or covered in cum.*
PAGE SIX
PANEL ONE: *Jamal looks on his phone and sees that it’s 1am*
“Oh shit I need to get back!”
PANEL TWO: *Show one of the strippers inflated belly and a magnifying image of sperm meeting the egg*
PANEL THREE: *Mike is staggering out of the back of the club still woozy. Behind him is a black van.*
“I think we found a good specimen for testing” A thought bubble
PANEL FOUR: *Jamal opens the door to his house and see’s Becky still asleep on the couch*
PANEL FIVE (SPLIT):
*Jamal kisses Becky on the forehead*
*He places his hand on her pregnant belly*
PANEL SIX: *Jamal has Becky in his arms and is carrying her up the stairs and she’s still asleep*
“Something is wrong with me sweetheart…I love you…I think I need your help”
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