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Baby Overload Part 8 (No Artist...yet)
🕑 Added 2021-02-11 16:02:55 +0000 UTC
PAGE ONE
Panel One: Becky is sitting on the couch with food on her face, her belly is much bigger to the point her shirt can barely hold it in. She looks misrable.
Becky: “Ugh...my tummy. I think we over did it boys. It feels so hard.”
Panel Two: Becky sees her reflection of her messy face and food stained clothes in the reflection of their flat screen television and looks dissapointed.
Becky: “Oh Becky, look at yourself girl. You’re a mess, what is wrong with you?”
Panel Three: She’s struggling to get up off of the couch and is grunting while she’s doing it.
Becky: “Come on! So...damn...heavy!”
Panel Four: She’s finally able to stand upright and has her hand on her back.
Panel Five: She’s at he bottom of her stairs look up them.
Becky: “I’m so tempted to go outside and hose myself off instead of climbing up these stairs...here goes nothing I guess.”
Panel Six: She’s at the of the stairs bent over and leaning against the wall and is exhausted. Her big belly is hanging and her shirt as raised up almost to her breasts.
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Becky is taking off her shirt.
Becky: “Atta-girl let’s get freshened up we have things to do today.”
Panel Two: Her heavy breasts
Panel Three: Her bent over as she’s taking off her panties
Panel Four: The water from the shower hitting her breasts and belly, her hair is wet and has went from her typical style to long and hanging.
Panel Five: Her rubbing her breasts and lathering them up with soap
Panel Six: The silhouette of Becky in the shower washing up from outside of the shower.
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Jamal is walking through a large crowd of people and a few of them are very muscular looking men and women.
Panel Two: There is a large banner that says, Ronald Swartzannager Body Building Show, that two men on a ladder are hanging up.
Panel Three: Jamal approaches a big and strong woman and looks nervously at her.
Jamal: “Excuses me...miss...can you please tell me where I can find the vendor registration?”
Lady: “Find the man in the red shirt, he’s in charge of the vendors, he’s around here somewhere.”
Jamal: “T-thanks.”
Panel Four: Overhead view of Jamal walking throught the crowd of booths that are on each side of the room.
Panel Five: There’s a booth with a picture of a super muscuar bald man he’s holding a container of protein and is flexing. The banner on the booth says, Enraged Bull Protein! Grow Like A Beast!
Panel Six: Another booth shows a picture of a man and a woman who are super skinney and lean and happy looking. The banner on the booth says, LaxaTea! You’ll Be Summer Ready In No Time!
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Jamal sees the guy in the red shirt. He’s a scrawny looking guy that’s a little hunched over and is bald he has scruffy facial hair.
Jamal: “Excuse me sir, can I speak with you for a second?”
Panel Two: The man looks at Jamal with his eyebrowl arched.
Man: “What can I do for you? The event doesn’t start for another five days. If you’re trying to enter into the bodybuilding competition then I’m sorry to inform you all slots are filled.”
Jamal: “Oh no, I’m not a bodybuilder I’m a vendor.”
Panel Three: Jamal’s face looks as if he’s trying to hide the fact that he’s annoyed.
Man: “Okay good because with your condition you would surely lose compared to our other guys.”
Jamal: “Yeah...I bet...Anyway, I would like to register for my own booth.”
Panel Four: People are walking around the two of them.
Man: “Are you a part of our gold vendor program?”
Jamal: “No sir, I’m a local gym owner.”
Man: “Oh...so you’re a local business owner. Well that qualifies you for our discounted rate. I can get you in touch with the coordinator and she will get you a booth location.”
Jamal: “Great! By the way what is the discounted rate?”
Panel Five: The man is smiling but Jamal looks wide eyed.
Man: “$50,000, will that be an issue?”
Jamal: “Oh...well...no...but I will have to talk it over with the misses first of course.”
Man: “You will have to talk it over with your wife first in order to make a business decision at one of the biggest bodybuilding events in the world? Well fine. But just know that if another vendor walks into here your spot will be taken.”
Jamal: “Oh…”
Panel Six: The man is smiling like the Grench with a large devilish smile.
Man: “But we do take payments at very low interest rates I will go and get the paperwork and show you to the coordinators mobile office.”
PAGE FIVE
Panel One: A woman is watching Jamal in the distance of the crowd while he’s talking to the man her finger is on her earpiece.
Earpiece: “Status report Agent 171.”
Agent 171: “I’ve followed the subject to some type of health competition, he’s talking to what appears to be an employee. I can’t get a lock on their moving lips to lip read the conversation.”
Earpiece: “Very well. Find a way to infiltrate and keep a close eye on him. Your task will be to see if the subject any smells, document them only then report back.”
Agent 171: “Smells, sir?”
Earpeice: “That is correct, over and out.”
Panel Two: The doctor is sitting at a large desk, there is a microphone in front of him and computer screens. There is another scientist in the room with him.
Scientist: “Well according to our findings so far with Mike. Are you sure that Agent 171 will be able to just document her findings without the possibility of losing control like Agent 069?”
The Doctor: “We shall see. But just like the subject Mike there has to be a trigger that causes the pheromone. According to Agent 171 there are plenty of women at the event, including herself of course. And none of them have responded the way our female scientists did to our subject.”
Panel Three: The Doctor is typing on his computer
The Doctor: “I personally examined Agent 171 before she left and she’s not ovulating and shows minor signs that she’s about to release any mature eggs. I have a working theory and she is just the new test subject.”
Scientist: “Ah...very good sir.”
Panel Four: Jamal is standing in front of a fat woman that’s sitting behind the desk, her finger is pointing to a part on a stack of papers. Jamal looks nervous.
Lady: “And sign here as well handsome, this states that you are aware of any fees that may occur after your payment is five days late. And then once I get a few more signatures we will be good to go.”
Panel Five: The woman is looking at the bulge of Jamal’s gym gym shorts and is biting her lower lip
Lady: “Are you also considering entering into the competition?”
Jamal: No ma’am”
Lady: “Oh my, such a shame, I would have loved to see you on stage. Anyway we’re on the last part and then your booth will be in section twenty one c.”
Panel Six: Agent 171 is outside of a mobile trailer with the word vendor coordinator written on the door. She has her ear placed on the door and is snooping in on their conversation.
Agent 171: “Twenty-one C...got it.”
PAGE SIX
Panel One: Jamal is back in the venue and is holding map in his hand.
Jamal: “Twenty-one...C...where is…”
Agent 171: “Mr. Jamal?”
Panel Two: Jamal looks over at a woman with long hair, she’s wearing a red shirt with tan shorts. She’s happily waving at him.
Panel Three: She’s shaking his hand happily and is wearing a name tag.
Agent 171: “Hey sir! Nice to meet you I’m your booth assistant.”
Jamal: “Oh cool! Nice to meet you...Anna...I’m Jamal...I mea well you already knew that.”
Panel Three: Agent 171 is flexing her bicep and smiling.
Agent 171: “Well let’s get started! You’ve got my help for the entire time of the event. I’m really strong so I can help you carry anything you need from your truck or trailer and help you get set up. Also, we can go over a product list and if you have any scripts or uniforms for me to wear. I can help you with that too!”
Jamal: “Awesome! I was going to have my employee Chad do all of that with me but it’s great that I have you along instead. I will have to go back to my gym to grab a few things, I will be back.”
Agent 171: “Oh no problem I will come with you to help.”
Panel Four: Jamal looks nervous and is rubbing the back of his neck.
Jamal: “Oh no that’s fine I can grab it all.”
Agent 171: “Well between you and me. That was a lot of money to pay to do everthing yourself. You might as well let me do my job to help justify some of those expenses.”
Jamal: “Well you have a point there. Let’s get going then.”
Panel Five: Jamal is driving his car and Agent 171 is sitting in the passanger seat next to him. He’s highly focused on the road.
Jamal Thought Bubble: “What was I thinking signing without talking to Becky first? She’s going to be so pissed I didn’t talk to her first especially since she does all the accounting. Fuck! Maybe I can talk to her about getting back into being a journalist again. But she will know something’s up she’s noisy like that. Fuck!”
Panel Six: Agent 171 is glancing over at Jamal
Agent 171: “What’s so special about Jamal that has everyone at The Foundation on high alert? I wish they would tell me things so I know what’s going on. Why is he so special? And what on earth is The Doctor talking about with this...smell?”
PAGE SEVEN
Panel One: Jamal’s car is in front of his gym.
Jamal speech bubble: “Alright this is it. I have a truck around back with a small trailer we will use to load everything up and luckily it’s all in the back of the building in a storage closet.”
Panel Two: Jamal is waving at Chad as he’s walking by the front desk, Agent 171 is with him and Chad looks stunned at how pretty she is.
Jamal: “Hey Chad how are things going today?”
Chad: “Wow...I mean great Jamal. I got a few new sign ups and I have some follow up calls to make. But besides that it’s the same as usual.”
Jamal: “You’re the man Chad! Keep it up!”
Panel Three: Chad is watching the two of them walking away and looks baffled.
Chad thought bubble: “First that red haired chick and now this lady, Jamal better hope Becky doesn’t find out about these foxy ladies. I don’t want to be around here when she does. Oh well...none of my business.”
Panel Four: Jamal and Agent 171 are walking down a hallway.
Agent 171: “If you don’t mind me asking, what got you into the fitness industry?”
Jamal: “Oh I don’t mind you asking at all. It’s actually a family business, my grandfather passed it down to my dad and now I have the business.”
Agent 171: “Oh wow that’s amazing! Do you like it?”
Panel Five: Jamal is smiling as he’s talking to her.
Jamal: “I love it actually. I have so many great memories of working out, learning and meeting new people when my dad ran this place. And maybe one day I will pass down the mantle to one of my sons.”
Agent 171: “Oh that’s sweet, how many kids do you have?”
Panel Six: Jamal looks kind of nervous the two of them are now standing in front of a door that says Storage.
Jamal: “Well they’re not born yet. But I soon will be the proud dad of...eight boys.”
Agent 171: “What? Eight? For real?”
Jamal: “Yeah crazy right? But it’s the truth my wife is at home right now lugging around eight healthy babies inside of her belly.”
PAGE EIGHT
Panel One: Agent 171 looks wide eyed.
Agent 171: “I hate to be nosey but did you all do IVF or something?”
Jamal: “Surprisingly no, I mean I took some pills that helped me out in...ways...but that’s about it. And low and beyond, eight boys are now on the way.”
Agent 171: “I don’t know what else to say besides good luck and I mean that in a loving way.”
Jamal: “Thanks. Well this is it let’s hop to it.”
Panel Two: The two of them are inside of a large storage closet, there are banners, trophies, weight equipment and stacks of papers on shelves everywhere.
Jamal: “I can show you what we need to grab. Sorry it’s kind of a mess in here I don’t come in here often especially since I didn’t hear about the competition until recently.”
Panel Three: Agent 171 is carrying a box
Agent 171 thought bubble: “Pills? Eight babies on the way. What is The Doctor not telling me? And now I’m on assignment with this guy to what? Smell him? What the fuck is going on with this assignment? And this damn finger pricker thing in my pocket The Doctor gave me to use if I smell something is beyond weird. Fuck it, with what they’re paying me I won’t ask questions until this contract is over.”
Panel Four: A mirage of Agent 171 and Jamal carrying a lot of stuff back and forth through the hallway.
Panel Five: Jamal is sweating and so is Agent 171 he has a box in his hands while he’s talking to her.
Jamal: “Sorry it’s so hot in here there aren’t any vents that go into this room, it’s an old building.”
Agent 171: “That’s fine I will adjust myself in a moment to cool down.”
Jamal: “I need to do the same, let me go and grab some cold waters out of the customer fridge and I will be right back.”
Panel Six: Jamal is at the fridge getting two water bottles out and is still sweating.
Jamal thought bubble: “She’s one hell of a hard worker but for fifty thousand dollars I guess they would give me a hard worker. And she’s pretty damn cute too. NO JAMAL! Get your head out of your ass you’ve got things to do! What the hell is wrong with you!”
PAGE NINE
Panel One: Jamal is about to walk back into the storage room, there is a shadow silhouette of Agent 171 bent over in the room picking something up.
Jamal: “Hey I got us some…”
Panel Two: Jamal stops in the doorway and is wide eyed as he looks at Agent 171. She’s bent over with her hair up and her shirt is off. She’s wearing a training bra and her butt cheeks are sticking out a bit.
Agent 171: “Oh great! Thanks Jamal.”
Panel Three: Jamal is watching her drink the water and sees the sweat dripping down her sexy body. He’s still holding his water bottle.
Panel Four: His dick bulge grows a little and there’s a cloud of the pheromone around him.
Panel Five: Agent 171 has her eyes closed as she’s chugging the water, the pheromone cloud is close to her.
Panel Six: The pheromone cloud has surrounded her and her eyes are wide open as she smells it.
PAGE TEN
Panel One: Agent 171 has stopped drinking the water and is looking around the room.
Agent 171 thought bubble: “What is that smell? It smells, it smells like...like? I don’t know but I have to find out where it’s coming from. Is this the smell The Doctor was talking about?”
Panel Two: Agent 171 is talking to Jamal, he has his head tilted up because he’s smelling the air.
Agent 171: “Do you smell that?”
Jamal: “No. I don’t smell anything. Well I do smell the rubber from the gym mats that have been in here for a while but that’s about it. Does it smell bad?”
Agent 171: “Yes. I mean no. I mean I can’t tell what it smells like but...I have to find out what it is.”
Panel Three (SPLIT):
SPLIT ONE: Agent 171 is walking closer to Jamal but she’s still looking around the room.
Agent 171: “The smell is so much stronger now...it’s…”
SPLIT TWO: Agent 171 is standing in front of Jamal now
Agent 171: “It’s you.”
Panel Four: Jamal is smelling himself
Jamal: “Oh sorry about that I guess I’m a bit sweaty I have a shower here and a change of clothes. I can freshen up before we get out of here. Apologies.”
Agent 171: “No, no, it’s not a bad smell. It’s...well...rather amazing actually.”
Panel Five: Agent 171’s nipples have gotten hard and are poking from her training bra she’s looking at Jamal with a big smile and she’s really close to him now.
Agent 171: “In fact I can’t get enough of it.”
Panel Six: Agent 171’s face looks shocked.
Agent 171 thought bubble: “Wait what the hell am I doing!? Snap out of it girl you’re an Agent not some...some...HOE! Get a grip! Is this what The Doctor was talking about? Wait! The finger prick! He said I have to do the finger prick if I smelled something or else the contract is voided!”
Agent 171: “Um excuse me...I need to use your restroom.”
PAGE ELEVEN
Panel One: Agent 171 is in the women’s restroom and is looking at herself in the mirror, she’s sweating heavily.
Agent 171: “Get a grip girl, what the hell is wrong with you?”
Panel Two: She pulls out a small device with a single button on it, there’s a note on it that says ‘place on finger and push button’
Panel Three: The device is on her finger and there is a click noise.
Agent 171: “Ouch!”
Panel Four: Back at the underground lab a computer is beeping
Scientist: “Well that was faster than expected. Doctor the readings are in from the hormone device you gave 171.”
The Doctor: “Excellent, open them up and let’s take a look shallwe?”
Panel Five: The doctors glasses are gleaming as they reflect charts and numbers in them, he has a huge smile on his face.
The Doctor: “This is remarkable and better than I had theorized! Her Luteinizing hormone is off the charts! As well as other hormones, rather interesting.”
The Scientist: “Meaning what exactly Doctor?”
Panel Six: The Doctor's smile is much bigger
The Doctor: “It means that Jamal is triggering this by making her brain overreact and it forces her into ovulation. Tell her to report back immediately and I have more tests I want to run.”
PAGE TWELVE
Panel One: Jamal has closed the door to the storage room and his face looks panicked.
Jamal: “Shit I need to find a bucket or something.”
Panel Two: Jamal’s hard one is trying to break through his gym shorts and his balls have grown.
Panel Three: Back at the underground a scientist is talking to The Doctor, she has a cellphone in her hand.
Scientist: “That was 171, she’s left his gym and is on her way to the rendezvous point now for pick up. But something seems wrong, her voice sounded stressed.”
The Doctor: “Oh no, nothing is wrong with her per say.”
Panel Four: Agent 171 is sitting at a bus stop her pussy is dripping wet and she’s still sweating she looks horny.
The Doctor Speech Bubble: “By these readings she’s having the time of her life, in fact I wouldn’t be surprised if she’s thinking about disobeying my orders and running back to the subject now.”
Panel Five: A van is pulling up to the bus stop and is beeping its horn at Agent 171
Speech bubble: “And what are your orders with the test subject Jamal?”
Panel Six: Jamal is jerking off and is massively hard and his balls are engorged and veiny. He looks close to cumming.
The Doctor speech bubble: “Let’s keep an eye on him but I have a feeling things are about to get very interesting.
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