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Part Two Updated & Additional Furry Scenes
🕑 Added 2022-02-01 20:15:14 +0000 UTCHey everyone! Work on Baby Overload has kicked off and I'm happy to have Boom970 back on board! Here are the additional rewrites for chapter two, this will fit in before the two-month time laps when Becky and Jamal find out they're having octuplets. I felt it was important to add this part because it shows just how powerful the FertilityMax pills are on Jamal. I will probably add another section to chapter three before the timelapse. Let me know what you all think!
Part Two: Boom970 & _DirtyMac
* PAGE BEFORE THE FURRY TRANSITION *
PAGE ONE
Panel One: Jamal is standing at his kitchen counter and is making a protein shake, there’s a massive jar of protein that says, Muscle Max.
Becky Speech Bubble (Behind Jamal): “Good morning babe.”
Panel Two: Jamal turns towards Becky while still blending the shake. Becky’s PJ shirt is raised a bit due to her growing belly. She has her hand on her stomach.
Jamal: “Good morning sweetheart, how did you sleep?”
Becky: “Like a baby.”
Panel Three: POV of Becky's belly, Jamal is looking at it from a distance.
Jamal: “Speaking of baby, I don’t mean to be rude but don’t you seem a little big already?”
Panel Four: POV of Becky looking down and she can see her toes past her belly.
Becky: “I kind of thought the same thing, maybe I will just show earlier, I heard that can happen with new moms.”
Jamal: “Well let’s just hope there’s only one in there. After I drink this I’m going to hop in the shower.”
Becky: “That’s fine I need to call the Doctor anyone to set up an appointment for our first ultrasound.”
Panel Five: Becky has the fridge open while Jamal is chugging the protein shake and is shaking his head ‘no’.
Becky: “I can tell you one thing I’m super hungry, do you want anything else to eat?”
Panel Six: POV of Becky cooking, Jamal can be seen in the background walking up the stairs. Becky is drooling as she has bacon cooking on the skillet.
Jamal: “I’ll be down in a little bit after I take a shower.”
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Jamal is naked and is setting clothes out gym clothes.
Jamal Thought Bubble: “It’s so strange I remember having sex with her, but not the time that’s passed in between things. She’s right I must be super stressed.”
Panel Two: Jamal discovers the pill bottle sticking out from underneath a shirt.
Jamal: “So that’s where those went, I should throw these out since Becky’s already pregnant.”
Panel Three: Jamal is holding the pills in his hand and is shaking the bottle.
Jamal: “It seemed like I was dreaming about the sex we had. It was so wild, but there’s no way that was real. I felt like an animal the whole time and I couldn’t stop. I felt so…powerful.”
Panel Four: Jamal has a memory bubble of him having sex with Becky and how he held her up against the wall.
Jamal: “I felt so strong when I was holding Becky, she felt as light as a pillow. I bet these would be great at the gym…no…I shouldn’t.”
Panel Five: Jamal is walking in the bathroom still holding the pill bottle.
Jamal: “Well maybe I shouldn’t..”
Panel Six (SPLIT):
Split One: Jamal is taking one of the pills.
Split Two: Jamal is closing the medicine cabinet, maybe one wouldn’t hurt to try at the gym today.
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Becky is sitting at the breakfast table with a bunch of food on the table.
Becky: “Goodness I’m starving I don’t know if I can eat all of this.”
Panel Two: Becky is shoving food into her mouth and she’s getting food on her clothes.
Panel Three: As she continues to eat her shirt buttons tighten.
Panel Four: She starts chugging a gallon of milk.
Panel Five: POV of Becky’s stomach as she continues to chug the milk, her shirt button is barely holding on.
Panel Six: Her button snaps and her shirt is very dirty.
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Jamal is in the shower and he feels jittery.
Jamal: “Man these things kick in fast, I feel great already.”
Panel Two: Jamal looks at his curtain rod and they’re bolted into the wall.
Jamal: “I feel like I could do some pull-ups right now, I have so much energy.”
Three Split Panel:
Split One: Jamal doing a pull-up.
Jamal: “13…”
Split Two: Continues the pull-up’s
Jamal: “33…”
Jamal: “and…60…”
Panel Four: Jamal is flexing his bicep with a smug grin on his face.
Jamal: “Holy shit I don’t think I’ve ever done that many I feel like I could do some more I feel so…GOOD!”
Panel Five: Becky is walking up the stairs and her clothes are dirty, she looks miserable and is rubbing her swollen stomach.
Becky: “I need to get cleaned up. Goodness, you’re such a pig girl, what were you thinking eating like that?”
Panel Six: Becky is taking off her dirty clothes in the bedroom.
PAGE FIVE
Panel One: Becky slides open the shower curtain and is looking at Jamal.
Becky: “Move over babe I made a mess and I need to get cleaned up.”
Panel Two: Jamal is watching Becky shower, her hair is wet and water is running down her naked body. Her eyes are closed as she’s letting the water run down her face.
Panel Three: Jamal looks at her bigger belly.
Jamal Thought Bubble: “Did she get…bigger?”
Panel Four: Becky is squeezing her breasts together under the running water.
Becky: “I bet you can’t wait for these to get big and heavy.”
Panel Five: Becky sees how hard Jamal is.
Jamal: “I like the way they look now!”
Panel Six: Becky is still looking at Jamal's dick her eyebrows are raised high.
Becky: “Oh I can tell, let’s do something about that when we get out of the shower…hey babe I have a question…did you get bigger?”
PERSONAL NOTE: INSERT FURRY PANEL THAT WAS DONE BY _DIRTYMAC
END
PART THREE
PAGE ONE
Panel One: Jamal wakes up laying in bed, Becky is gone he’s still laying in the same sleeping position. (SAME SLEEPING POSITION HE WAS IN AT THE END OF THE FURRY COMIC.)
Jamal: “Damn that wore me out, what time is it?”
Panel Two: Jamal looks over at his alarm clock and sees that it’s 11 AM
Jamal: “Oh shit I need to get to the gym!”
Panel Three: POV Becky is downstairs on the phone and is smiling, Jamal is rushing down the stairs with a gym bag in his hands.
Becky: “Alright Doctor that will work, we will see you in two months for the appointment. Thanks.”
Panel Four: Jamal is kissing Becky on the forehead.
Jamal: “Sorry sweetie I have to get going but I can’t forget my girl's kiss, I need to take your car today the truck is acting up.”
Becky: “Okay love you! Thanks for this morning, you really know how to ware a girl out.”
Panel Five: Jamal is driving and talking to himself.
Jamal: “Oh man I can’t believe I fell asleep again and now I’m late. I hope Dan isn’t angry with me.”
Panel Six: Jamal pulls up to Pumped Up Fitness.
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Jamal is walking past the front desk.
Jamal: “Sorry I’m late Dan, I hope things haven’t been to crazy for you.”
Dan: “Nah all good boss, it’s been a slow Monday morning, like every morning really.”
Jamal: “That’s good I guess, I need to run to my office real quick.”
Dan: “Alright boss, and I put the mail on your desk.”
Panel Two: Jamal is now sitting at his office desk and is looking at a letter that has PAST DUE written on it. There’s a laptop sitting on his desk with a pear logo.
Jamal: “Geez, I really need to drum up some business I’m getting behind on things again.
Panel Three: Jamal has opened the laptop and he looks disappointed as he’s looking at the screen.
Jamal: “Let’s see what our monthly subscribers are looking like…oh…we went down by eight…geez.”
Panel Four: Jamal is rubbing his forehead and is leaning back in his chair in frustration.
Jamal: “What am I gonna do? I need to advertise but I have to pay the advertisers those back payments. Now we’ve got a kid on the way and of course, business keeps dropping.”
Panel Five: Jamal is looking at a picture of a jacked bodybuilder with an afro, he’s standing in front of Pumped Up Fitness with his thumbs up.”
Jamal: “Geez Pops…I wish you were still here…you knew how to keep this place running way better than I’ve ever been able to.”
Panel Six: A speaker on the wall in Jamal’s office.
Speaker: “Hey boss I have a customer looking to do some personal training with you. I’m working with a client now, are you available?”
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Jamal is shaking hands with a skinny guy.
Jamal: “Of course! We’re more than just a gym at Pumped Up Fitness, we’re a family. And I would love to show you the ropes on how to do some workouts. Let’s start off with the bench press. I will go first to show you how to do it and then we will switch.”
Panel Two: Jamal is putting on his last plate on the bench bar, he has four of them total, two on each side.
Jamal: “When you do the bench you have to take into account the weight of the bar as well. So with these four plates, this is two hundred and twenty-five pounds. This is a bit heavy for me but I don’t go any higher without a spotter, remember safety first.”
Panel Three SPLIT:
SPLIT ONE: Jamal is pressing the weight back up.
Jamal: “Make sure your muscles are nice and tight before liftoff it will make things much…”
SPLIT TWO: Jamal lifts the weights up with ease.
Jamal: “easier”
Panel Four: Jamal looks confused at the weights as he’s still holding the bar in his hands.”
Jamal Thought Bubble: “Holy shit that was too easy that felt like it was only two plates.”
Jamal: “One on one-second sir, I want to try something. And then it’s your turn.”
Panel Five: Jamal has put on two more plates and is laying on the bench he has the bar down towards his chest.
Jamal Thought Bubble: “There’s no way..”
Panel Six: Jamal lifts the bar up easily again and he’s wide-eyed.
Jamal Thought Bubble: “holy shit there’s no way this is three hundred and fifteen pounds.”
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Jamal is watching the skinny man lift a much smaller amount of weight and he’s struggling a little bit.
Jamal: “That’s it! Power through it, you’ve got this!”
Panel Two: The man lifts the weights and Jamal looks genuinely happy.
Jamal: “Man that’s what I’m talking about!”
Skinny guy: “Oh wow I did it!”
Panel Three SPLIT:
The clock goes from 11:30pm to 1pm
Panel Four: The skinny guy is standing next to Jamal with a smile on his face and is sweating, he has a water bottle in his hand.
Skinny guy: “Oh man that was a heck of a workout, thank you! I definitely want to sign up for the personal trainer program!”
Jamal: “I’m happy to hear that let’s get you registered and I will see you back again tomorrow for some cardio!”
Panel Five: Jamal and Dan are helping people around at the gym.
Panel Six: Jamal and Dan are at the front desk, Dan has some papers in his hand.
Dan: “Not a bad day. But no offense boss I don’t mind it when it ends.”
Jamal: “Yeah I bet. I really wish I could keep this place open for twenty-four hours though.”
Dan: “What’s holding you back? I must admit closing up at eight is a little early for a gym.”
Jamal: “I need to hire two more people and the three sign-ups we got today aren’t going to cover that.”
Dan: “Yeah I gotcha…well I will see you tomorrow.”
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Jamal is waving as Dan is leaving.
Jamal: “Have a good night I need to do a few things before heading home.”
Panel Two: Jamal is back at the bench and has loaded up four hundred and five pounds onto the bench.
Jamal: “Let’s give it a try.”
Panel Three: Jamal struggles with the weights because they’re too heavy.
Jamal: “Geez I did the three-fifteen like it was nothing but now it feels like this is a thousand pounds.”
Panel Four: Back at home Jamal is running up the stairs and Becky is sitting on the couch watching TV. Becky has a small bowl of popcorn next to her.
Jamal: “Hey sweetie, I have to grab something and head back to the gym for a little bit.”
Becky: “Okay babe”
Panel Five SPLIT: Back at the gym Jamal is standing in front of the bench with 405lbs still on the bar.
Jamal: “Let’s test something out.”
SPLIT TWO: Jamal takes a pill
Panel Six: Jamal is jittery and he’s about to lift the weight.
Jamal: “Alright here goes nothing…”
PAGE FIVE
Panel One: Jamal is sitting upright on the bench press seat and is sweating with a smile on his face.
Jamal: “Four fucking times…I lifted four hundred and five pounds four fucking times! This shit is amazing. I wonder what else I can do.”
Panel Two: Jamal is EZ bar curling four plates.
Jamal: “Lightweight baby!”
Panel Three: Jamal is squatting 650lbs
Jamal: “Fuck I swear I could add on more plates.”
Panel Four: Jamal is doing the punching bag and is sweating.
Jamal: “Damn I feel like I can put a hole through this thing.”
Panel Five: Jamal is taking a shower now, his internal x-ray shows that his brain and body are flooded with the effects of the pills.
Panel Six: Jamal's balls and dick grow slightly.
PAGE SIX
Panel One: Jamal is driving home.
Jamal: “Damn I didn’t realize it was almost midnight I feel like I can keep going.”
Panel Two: A sexy woman catches Jamal’s attention as he’s driving past her, she’s jogging with a light on her head and her huge tits are bouncing.
Jamal: “My goodness look at that sexy thang!”
Panel Three: Jamal looks down and see’s that his dick is hard and bigger than before and it’s almost torn through his gym shorts.
Jamal: “holy shit!”
Panel Four: Jamal is at home and Becky is in bed snoring.
Jamal: “pssst Becky…are you awake? If so are you horny by chance?”
Becky: “ *grunt*...no..cheesecake… *snore*”
Panel Five: Jamal is sitting on the toilet jerking off with his eyes tightly closed and there are thought bubbles of the jogger's massive tits. Another thought bubble of her on her knees with her mouth open waiting for him to cum.
Jamal: “Geez my balls…hurt…but I…need…to…”
Panel Six: Jamal is blowing a large load
Jamal: “CUUUUUMMMM!!!”
PAGE SEVEN
Panel One: (The Next Day) Jamal is at the gym with an elderly woman and is helping her stretch. Dan is standing next to him.
Dan: “Hey boss can I speak with you for a moment?”
Jamal: “Of course Dan, I will be right back Miss Marshall, you keep up that stretch.”
Panel Two: Dan has a concerned look on his face and the two of them are standing in front of a security camera monitor. There’s a small image of Jamal doing squats on the screen.
Dan: “I know it’s not my place to tell another man how to work out. But I checked the cameras last night before deleting the file to save on storage and I saw you hitting the weights. Boss…what the fuck? You should have had a spotter you could have hurt yourself lifting like that.”
Panel Three: Dan leans in real close and whispers to Jamal.
Dan: “Jamal be straight with me. What juice are you taking? A few weeks ago you came in all loopy and sitting in your office all day. And then last night you’re power lifting like it’s nothing.”
Jamal: “Dan I’m not on anything.”
Dan: “Boss I swear you’ve put on a few inches of muscle overnight…come on…what are you on?”
Jamal: “Once again I’m not on anything watch the front while I go to the bathroom.”
Panel Four: Jamal is looking at himself in the mirror and is flexing his bicep.
Jamal: “Dans right I have put on some muscle.
Panel Five: Jamal remembers last night and how he felt his muscles expanding
Jamal: “That was pretty crazy last night.”
Panel Six: Jamal looks in his shorts at how big his dick and balls have gotten.
Jamal: “And this is pretty crazy too.”
PAGE EIGHT
Panel One: Jamal is working out with a client and the pheromone is emitting from his and going all around the room.
Panel Two: A woman is stretching and her nose is in the air.
Woman: “What is that smell? It smells…amazing!”
Panel Three: Jamal notices the woman frantically looking around is now speaking with his client.
Jamal: “I’m sorry sir, give me a moment I need to check on someone.”
Panel Four: Jamal is standing in front of the woman, she has hearts in her eyes.
Jamal: “Ma’am are you okay I noticed…”
Woman: “It’s you! You’re the one that smell is coming from!”
Panel Five: Jamal is smelling his under arms and looks confused.
Jamal: “I mean I do smell a little bit but that’s just from working out, I think we all smell including you miss…no offense.”
Panel Six: Jamal has his hands up and is backing away from the woman as she’s crawling towards him on her hands and knees with hearts in her eyes. A few people are noticing what’s happening.
Woman: “No that’s not it. You don’t stink you smell amazing no beyond amazing…I need you.”
PAGE NINE
Panel One: Jamal in his office he looks frantic and out of breath as he’s leaning against the door trying to keep it closed while the lady is knocking hard on it.
Jamal: “What the fuck is wrong with this lady?”
Panel Two: Outside of the office the lady is beating on the door with huge hearts in her eyes and her legs and pressed together because she’s uncontrollably horny.
Woman: “Please let me in I promise I won’t bite unless you want me to.”
Panel Three: Jamal is still pressed against the door and the womans voice makes Jamal’s eyes go wide.
Woman: “Please mister if you open the door I will write you a check for whatever amount you want. Or I will give you anything you want, please open the door I’m so fucking wet right now.”
Panel Four: Jamal has opened the door and she’s flying in the air towards Jamal.
Panel Five: The woman is giving Jamal a blow job but his dick has grown while it was in her mouth and she looks mortified because it’s too big.
Panel Six: The woman is leaving Jamal’s office and she’s rubbing her jaw and looks angry.
Jamal: “Hey I’m sorry miss I can make it up to you. What about that check?”
Woman: “As if…you’re way to fucking big…I think you sprained my jaw…I’m out of here.”
Jamal: “But you came on to me! What the heck lady!?”
PAGE TEN
Panel One: * At The Doctors Office* The Doctor is sitting behind his desk and typing away at his laptop and there’s a knock on the door.
Doctor: “Come in.”
Panel Two: Agent 069 enters the office and is carrying a tablet.
Agent 069: “Sir, you need to see this I gathered some intel on the new subjects.”
Doctor: “Ah yes, I spoke to the wife not to long ago. What do you have to report?”
Panel Three: Agent 069 hands The Doctor the tablet.
Agent 069: “I don’t know if this is bad or not sir, but the female subject was eating heavily yesterday morning.”
Doctor: “Of course she is, she’s pregnant, why would she not eat more?”
Agent 069: “No sir you misunderstand me…I mean that she was eating as if it was her last meal. I got a video of her downing a gallon of milk.”
Panel Four: The Doctor is holding the tablet and he has his hand on his forehead.
Doctor: “Besides the milk, what else was she eating?”
Agent 069: “Enough food to feed five people.”
Doctor: “Where you able to get a visual if her stomach shrank back down afterwards?”
Agent 069: “Yes sir, if you scroll you’ll see the difference. While she did gain she was eating popcorn hours later when the husband came home. Her stomach had gone down quite a bit.”
Panel Five: The Doctor has his hands balled in frustration
Doctor: “Fuck! FUCK! I was sure of the formula this time, there’s no way this is happening again my calculations were perfect.”
Panel Six: A split cut back to Becky at home vacuuming the carpet in the living room and Jamal is jerking off in his office.
Doctor Speech Bubble: “Keep an eye out on anything suspicious with the female subject, she might be dangerous. And let’s make sure nothing out of the ordinary is happening with the male subject as well. Keep a close eye on them.”
PAGE ONE (_DirtyMac)
Panel One: POV of a bathroom mirror that’s steamy, there is a shadow of a man in the mirror. (This shadow needs to have some resemblance of a silhouette of a horse character for the reveal.
Jamal Speech Bubble: “Ah it feels good to be nice and clean.”
Panel Two: Jamal wipes the mirror and looks horrified that he realizes he’s a horse.
Jamal: “What the fuck!?”
Becky Speech Bubble: “What’s wrong sweetie”
Panel Three: Jamal looks down and sees his horse dick.
Jamal: “I’m a HORSE!?”
Becky Speech Bubble: “Yeah I know and I’m waiting for my big horse to get his ass in here!”
Panel Four (SPLIT):
Split One: Jamal is reaching into the medicine cabinet, the open medicine cabinet has the FertileMax pill bottle in it.
Split Two: Jamal is holding the pill bottle in his hand.
Jamal: “What’s happening to me? Am I hallucinating?”
LAST PAGE: Becky and Jamal are laying next to each other. Jamal’s dick has flopped over his leg and cum is everywhere. Becky is still inflated.
