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🕑 Added 2021-04-19 02:19:19 +0000 UTCNote: This new character is actually of the strippers from the anthropomorphic version of the comic. Let me know if you have any story ideas before I send this off to an artist!
PART NINE
PAGE ONE
Pane One: Becky is getting dressed and wearing a long dress that barely goes past her belly.
Becky: “I remember when I first got this dress, it was so long on me and now it looks like a shirt. Oh boys, look what you’re doing to me.”
Panel Two: Her hand is on her belly and she looks happy.
Becky: “While all of you were a surprise your dad and I tried for so long to have just one of you. And now we have one baby for every year we’ve been married.”
Panel Three: Becky has tears running down her face but she’s still smiling happily while she rubs her belly.
Becky: “It was so hard seeing all of those negative tests over the years and feeling so hopeless.”
Panel Four: (FLASHBACK) Becky and Jamal are walking together and are holding hands, she’s looking over at a woman carrying her baby in her arms.
Becky Speech Bubble: “Seeing all of those happy mom’s with their children and thinking that I would never be able to feel that same love.”
Panel Five: Becky is on her laptop
Becky Speech Bubble: “And I hated going on social media for the longest.”
Panel Six: On the screen there is a picture of a man pointing at his wife’s big belly and he has a wide smile. A woman is holding a felt board that says, “One More Week Left”
Becky: “I tried to feel so happy for my friends but after a while it became so hard.”
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Becky is sitting up in her bed, the room is dark and the light from the moon is shining on her and she’s crying.
Becky: “And no matter how low I felt…”
Panel Two: (POV FRONT VIEW) Jamal’s arm is around her shoulder while she’s still crying.
Becky: “And no matter how broken my heart was…”
Panel Three: Jamal is holding Becky in his arms, her head is laying on his chest.
Becky: “You dad was always there for me to put the pieces back together.”
Panel Four: Becky and Jamal look like they're in their early teens and holding hands while they’re walking through the hallway in a school.
Becky: “I’ve known your dad since I was thirteen and he was fourteen and he’s always been my best friend.”
Panel Five: Teenage Becky is standing behind her dad. Her dad is a bald man with a mustache and a button up shirt. Becky has a frown on her face.
Becky: “Your grandpa wasn’t to happy I was with your dad.”
Panel Six: Jamal is in a muscle car with big tires and a loud exhaust. There's smoke coming from the tires as he’s doing a burnout in front of Becky’s house. He’s wearing sunglasses
Becky: “And a part of that was definitely your dads fault, he was such a show off when he was younger. But I know he was just trying to impress me.”
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Jamal is proposing to Becky and she looks so surprised
Becky: “And he impressed me so much that I had no choice but to say yes. It was the only thing I wanted to say. I never thought I would be married when I was nineteen.”
Panel Two: Becky and Jamal are arguing
Becky: “Things weren’t always perfect.”
Panel Three: Becky and Jamal are hugging.
Becky: “But we could never stay mad at each other no matter what happened.”
Panel Four (SPLIT):
SPLIT ONE: Becky is holding a pillow as she’s standing in front of a mirror and Jamal is putting on a shirt.
SPLIT TWO: She has the pillow under her shirt to make it look like she’s pregnant and she’s showing off her look to Jamal. He has hearts all around him.
Becky: “Once we got older we both knew something was missing.”
Panel Five: (POV) Becky is holding a positive pregnancy test
Becky: “And after so many years of trying you all came along.”
Panel Six: Jamal has Agent 069 bent over the desk and he’s fucking her hard.
Becky: “Your dad and I are so happy that you all will be here before we know it. And I know your dad will be great! Because I know that our love is something that can never be broken.”
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Becky is waddling over to her nightstand that is next to her bed.
Becky: “And speaking of your grandpa…”
Panel Two: The screen on Becky’s phone says, “Calling...Mom & Dad House”
Panel Three: Becky’s face looks very happy while she’s on the phone as she’s holding her belly.
Becky: “Hey momma!”
Becky’s Mom: “Oh sweetheart I haven’t heard from you in so long. Is everything okay? How’s my girl doing? Are you alright?”
Panel Four: Becky looks a little nervous while she’s on the phone.
Becky: “Sorry about that momma, things have just been very...crazy...which is why I’m calling you now. Momma...I’m pregnant.”
Panel Five: Becky is holding the phone away from her ear because her mom is screaming with joy. Becky’s still smiling.
Becky’s Mom: “Oh my goodness my sugar plum is having a baby! Richard! Richard! Come here Becky’s on the phone!”
Becky: “Momma! Momma! Hold on its not just one baby.”
Panel Six: Becky has the phone back to her ear.
Becky: “It’s octuplets.”
Becky’s Mom: “Oct...what?”
Becky: “I’m now twenty-six weeks with eight momma...hello?...Momma you there?”
PAGE FIVE
Page One: Becky looks confused while she’s still on the phone
Becky: “Momma you there?”
Becky’s Dad: “Sugarplum is that you? What happened to your mom? She fainted...are you okay? What’s going on?”
Panel Two: Becky looks surprised.
Becky: “Oh no! Is she okay?”
Becky’s Dad: “She’s waking up now hold on sugar plum...Martha what are you talking about?...Eight?...Eight what?”
Panel Three: Becky is still on the phone as she’s walking out of the room with her hand on her back to support her big belly.
Becky: “Well she passed out because I told her she was going to be a gramma to eight babies.”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh goodness sugar plum why did you adopt so many? I know you have a big heart but adopting eight kids at once is quite a hassle. Very funny sugar plum!”
Panel Four: Becky is now walking down the stairs, she looks like she’s struggling to balance her big belly as she walks.
Becky: “Daddy it’s far from a joke, trust me they’re heavy to carry around already...surprise!”
Panel Five: Becky sighs
Becky’s Dad: “Sweetie...are you...Oh I get it, April fools! You got us!”
Becky: “Daddy did you ever figure out how to use that smartphone?”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh finally that dag on blasted thing had me all…”
Becky: “Go get it real fast.”
Panel Six: Becky takes a selfie and she gets all her belly into the frame.
PAGE SIX
Panel One: Becky has her phone in her hand. The phone screen says, “Speaker On” “Picture Message Sent”
Becky: “I just sent you something daddy, I will know when you get it.”
Becky’s Dad: “Yup, I just heard my phone go off...be right back sugar plum let me go get it. I think your mother is awake now.”
Panel Two: Becky accidentally drops her phone.
Panel Three: She’s struggling to bend down and is grunting.
Becky: “Oh damn it...come on girl you can get it.”
Panel Four: POV of Becky’s ass as she’s bending down, her belly is showing from under her dress and she’s closer to her phone since she’s squatting down.
Becky: *Grunting*
Becky’s Dad: “Oh sugar honey ice tea! My plum is...is plump! Sweetheart when are you due!? What...what’s that noise?”
Panel Five: Becky has her phone in her hand and is struggling to stand back up, the phone is still on speaker.
Becky: “Sorry daddy. I dropped my phone. It was a struggle to bend down to get it. And to answer your question I’m only twenty-six weeks. I’m just a bit bloated from eating earlier.”
Becky’s Dad: “Oh no plum that’s all baby, not bloat...wait...struggling...where the hell is Jamal? Why isn’t he helping you?”
Panel Six: Becky is rolling her eyes.
Becky: “I’m fine daddy. I’m pregnant, not disabled and he’s at the gym.”
PAGE SEVEN
Panel One: Becky’s phone is yelling.
Becky’s Dad: “You mean to tell me my daughter is at home struggling and he’s just...just...dicking around at the gym!?”
Becky: “No daddy he owns one, remember?”
Becky’s Dad: “Okay well he has staff there I bet. He should be at home helping...I swear I told you about him...I...no Martha I’m not saying...well no...okay here.”
Panel Two: Becky is grabbing her car keys from off of the key hook and she has her purse on her shoulder.
Becky’s Mom: “I’m sorry Becky you know how your father can get. And I just saw the picture you’re ready to pop already! Why didn’t you tell us sooner?”
Becky: “Well they say you should wait until your twelve weeks. But since we’re expecting so many I thought we should wait until much later. You know...just in case.”
Panel Three: Becky is waddling to their new minivan
Becky’s Mom: “Now I don’t mean to intrude but we will come to town next Saturday. I have to see my plump little plum. Oh goodness a grandma to eight, so exciting! I have to go and calm your father down see you soon dear. Love you bunches!” *Phone hangs up*
Panel Four: Becky is crammed in the seat behind the steering wheel because her belly is in the way and the seat is slowly sliding back so she can fit.
Becky: “Sure mom see you soon I guess. I better let Jamal know.”
Panel Five: Jamal is holding his phone, POV angle of him waist up. His message reads, “My parents are coming to town next week I just told them the news...sorry!”
Panel Six: POV of Jamal’s pants are down and his huge dick is finally soft, there’s cum all over the place and he’s leaning on the door and sweating.
Jamal: “Well...fuck.”
PAGE EIGHT
Panel One: Becky is driving in the minivan and is thinking to herself. There’s a bulge on her belly from one of the babies kicking.
Thought Bubble: “Gosh. My dad really needs to calm down with how much he doesn’t like Jamal. He’s always picked at every little thing he’s done but now he really needs to lighten up since we have the boys on the way.
Panel Two: (X-RAY POV of her belly) The babies are moving around
Thought Bubble: It’s going to be quite a bumpy ride but your dad and I are ready! I think.
Panel Three: The van pulls up in front of a baby outlet store.
Panel Four: Becky is inside and is looking at the price of a crib, there is a woman nearby that is pregnant but her belly isn’t as big and she’s wearing a Hoppers shirt and she has large breasts. (Hoppers is a parody of Hooters)
Becky: “This one’s cute...let’s see...times that by eight...that will be around twenty-three hundred dollars for eight cribs. And that’s the cheapest one they have. I guess that will do.”
Panel Five: The Hoppers stripper is now talking to Becky.
Stripper: “You’re right this one is cute, does the tag say if it comes in grey? Or is it just this white?”
Becky: “It looks like it comes in black, grey and white.”
Stripper: “Oh sweet! I have to get one of these.”
Panel Six: Becky is looking at the stripper’s Hoppers shirt and her large breasts that are starting to lactate.
Becky: “Hoppers, is that the restaurant down on Main Street?”
Stripper: “Oh yes it is you’re the first person to call it that! Are you applying? I can get you in and believe it or not men would love to see you serve them some wings or on stage. You would kill it!”
Becky: “Stage?”
Stripper: “Yes! We’re also a strip club but I can’t complain the food is so good too. This little one really loves some wings and fried pickles.”
PAGE NINE
Panel One: Becky looks nervous
Becky: “Oh no, no...I could never do something like that...especially with all those people looking at me.”
Stripper: “Girl don’t be afraid to embrace what you’ve got belly or not I think you’re cute as a button.”
Panel Two: Becky is blushing
Becky: “Well thank you, my husband, hasn’t even said that to me in a while.”
Stripper: “Well girl let me tell you something don’t let that get you down and show him that you’re still a lioness.”
Becky: “Thanks I guess I could give it a try I did buy some lingerie not too long ago.”
Stripper: “Then wear it like a queen and show your man what you’re working with! Don’t be afraid to roar momma!”
Panel Three: Becky is nervous as she’s trying not to stare at the strippers large tits.
Becky: “You’re really sweet wish I could be as confident as you are.”
Stripper: “Girl don’t just wish, make it come true especially after you have that baby.”
Panel Four: Becky’s belly starts growling because she’s hungry, the stripper also notices the belly growl.
Stripper: “Well here’s the thing, I don’t start work for a few more hours and it’s ten cent wing Tuesday at Hoppers. Let’s go grab a bite to eat if you have the time.”
Becky: “Well…”
Stripper: “If not it’s no big thang. I know it’s not every day a random stripper invites you to eat wings with her at a strip club restaurant.”
Panel Five: Becky looks stunned because she hopes she didn’t offend the stripper
Becky: “Oh goodness no! That’s not what I meant by any means I’m so sorry if I-”
Stripper: “Oh goodness girl I’m just mess’n with you it’s all good doll. Well here’s what I will do I want to give you my number and feel free to stop by.”
Panel Six: The strippers hand is on Becky’s belly and the stripper is close to her, Becky is blushing.
Stripper: “They call me Candy, but my real name is Cindy I hope to see you soon Doll.”
Becky: “Yes of course.”
Stripper: “Great now let me borrow your phone so I can give you my number.”
PAGE TEN
Panel One: The stripper is walking away and is waving at Becky and smiling, Becky is still blushing as she waves back.
Stripper: “Don’t be afraid to stop by and visit me Doll, trust me the wings are delicious!”
Becky: “I think I will take you up on that Cindy, thanks!”
Panel Two: Becky’s phone is ringing in her pocket
Split One: *The screen on her phone says JJJ*
Split Two: *Becky’s face*
Becky: “What does he want?”
Panel Three: Becky answers the phone
Becky: “Hey Mr. J, how are you?”
Panel Four: Inside of an office, there’s a large sign on the wall that says Daily News Inc, the character looks like a chubbier version of J. Jonah Jameson from Marvel
JJJ: “Becky! My shooting star reporter! My go getter! We really miss you at Daily News, when are you coming back?”
Becky Voice Bubble: “Thanks Mr. J, but I told you I don’t know if I can come back. My husband needed help with his business so I had to leave. His dad passed that gym down to him and I didn’t want it to fall apart on him.”
JJJ: “I understand Becky, trust me I really do. Just know that there is always a seat here for you at Daily. Heck Pam misses you so much, heck even Jim talks about you.”
Becky Voice Bubble: “That’s very sweet of you all. Trust me I miss you all too but like I said Jamal needed me. Plus we’re also expecting.”
Panel Five: JJJ has a huge smile on his face
JJJ: “Becky! That's amazing to hear I truly mean that! Goodness I remember when we had Lilly, it’s hard to believe she’s in her forties now. It feels like yesterday that she took her first steps but now I’ve got three beautiful grand babies. Enjoy it Becky, do you know if it’s a boy or a girl?”
Becky Voice Bubble: “Boys.”
JJJ: “Oh there’s an ‘s’ at the end of that, I had a cousin who had twins and boy they were a handful but it was just more love to spread.”
Panel Six: JJJ’s mouth drops open
Becky: “Well we’re actually expecting eight baby boy’s...and before you say anything I know I can’t believe it myself.”
JJJ: “Becky...I...wow! That’s amazing...can...would you mind if we did a story on you? Local Mom Expecting Octuplets! I can see it now in big bold letters on the front page and even an interview.
Becky: “Well Mr. J, I’m not sure if…”
JJJ: “You know what? As a baby gift to you I will give you one eight thousand dollars for an interview. That’s one thousand dollars per bundle of joy. Deal?”
Becky Voice Bubble: “Well...that would pay for these cribs...alright Mr.J we can do the interview. I guess connect me with Pam so I can get things set up with her.”
PART TEN
PAGE ONE
Panel One: Becky is driving with one hand on her belly and she’s thinking.
Becky: “Maybe I should have talked to Jamal first before agreeing to that interview, well maybe it’s a good thing. I will talk to Mr. J about having it at his gym. Oh boys I hope your dad is okay with that, I might stop by the gym and see if he’s there.”
Panel Two: Jamal is trying to put his shorts on but his shorts on, they’re torn from his dick growth but they’re tearing more because he’s starting to get hard again.
Split One: Jamals shorts are bulging and about to rip
Split Two: His dick is close to tearing through them.
Jamal: “Damn it! I can’t get her out of my head! I need this dick to go down already! Fuck!”
Panel Three: Becky is sitting at an intersection and her right turn signal is blinking.
Panel Four: Her belly is rumbling again from being hungry and she looks down at her belly.
Becky: “Hungry already? Well I guess I will take up Cindy...or was it Candy? On her offer for those wings and then we will go and see your daddy.”
Panel Five: The van pulls up in front of Hoppers, there’s a large man standing in front of the door way.
Panel Six: Becky is standing in front of the big and tall security guard and he’s looking at her big belly
Guard: “You too huh? Seems like this place is a magnet all of a sudden for girls with bellies.”
Becky: “What?”
Guard: “Aren’t you here to see Rick? For try-outs?”
Becky: “Oh no, I’m here to eat.”
Guard: “Oh sorry miss we don’t open the restaurant for another ten minutes...but...what the heck I can let you in.”
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Becky is looking around the restaurant there are booths everywhere and girls in a Hooters like uniform are setting up tables. A few of them have small pregnant bellies; they're all wearing bunny ears on their heads.
Panel Two: One of the Hoppers girls approaches Becky she’s wearing bunny ear
Hopper Girl: “Hey miss I guess Doug let you in early, are you hear to eat? Or...for try-outs?”
Becky: “Oh yes he did and just to eat.”
Hopper Girl: “Oh great! Right this way I will get you a table by the kitchen if that works for you. I take it you’re here for ten cent wing day.”
Becky: “Oh yes, Cin...I mean Candy said you all had good food.”
Hopper Girl: “Oh miss you will be surprised how good the food is. When men tell their ladies they came here to eat they might not be lying and I mean that.”
Panel Three: The Hopper Girl has her hand out to a booth indicating for Becky to sit down.
Hopper Girl: “Here you go miss.”
Becky: “Thanks.”
Panel Four (Split): Becky will get stuck in the booth
Split One: Becky awkwardly sits down in the booth
Split Two: The Hopper Girl looks shocked and Becky’s belly is wedged in the booth.
Hopper Girl: “Oh goodness! I’m so sorry miss I should have known better! I’m so sorry!”
Panel Five: Becky is squinting her eyes from being uncomfortable with how tight her belly is stuck.
Hopper Girl: “Rick! Someone go get Rick!”
Panel Six: A guy that looks like the porn star Ron Jeremy runs over.
Rick: “What is it!?”
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Rick looks shocked
Rick: “Oh shit miss I’m sorry about that, there’s latch under the table I need to undo. I have to crawl under the table, is that okay with you?”
Becky: “Yes please...hurry...this is starting to hurt a bit.”
Panel Two: Rick is under the table
Panel Three: He’s not by Becky’s legs and belly and is staring at it with wide eyes.
Rick: *whispers* “Damn that’s a belly”
Panel Four (SPLIT):
Split One: *The table makes a click noise*
Split Two: *Becky’s belly pushes the table out and she sighs with relief*
Panel Five: Rick looks panicked and is sweating Becky is holding her sore belly
Rick: “Miss I am so sorry about that! You know what!? Your meal is on the house today, drinks and all.”
Becky: “Oww...thank you.”
Panel Six: The Hoppers Girl and Rick are walking away and talking to each other
Hoppers Girl: “You know she’s getting the wings special right?”
Rick: “I don’t care what she gets along as she doesn’t sue us. Besides, how much can she actually eat?”
PAGE FIVE
Panel One: Candy has a huge smile on her face with her bunny ears on as she’s approaching the table.
Candy: “Hey Doll I heard what happened, are you okay?”
Becky: “Yeah, this bump of mine just likes to get in the way. It’s gotten so heavy that I couldn’t stop myself from sitting down so fast.”
Panel Two: Becky is rubbing her belly still and it rumbles
Candy: “I meant to ask you when you were due, it looks like any day now.”
Becky: “Oh I wish but it’s no time soon, I’m only twenty six weeks.”
Candy: “Oh wow Doll, what are you having? A litter?”
Panel Three: Becky has an awkward smile on her face and Candy looks like she’s trying to calculate math in her head
Becky: “You could definitely say that, we’re having octuplet boys.”
Candy: “Wait...twins...triplets...quadruplets...so how many is octuplets?”
Becky: “That’s eight big growing boys and sixteen arms and legs that like to kick and punch in my already tight belly.”
Candy: “Well hot damn Doll you’re one strong momma!”
Panel Four: Candy has her hand on her belly
Candy: “Oh how cute we’re only a little over a month a part from each other.”
Panel Five: Becky notices that a few other of the Hoppers Girls that are setting up the restaurant are all pregnant and they all look around the same size.
Becky: “It looks like a few of you are expecting.”
Candy: “Oh yes we all are due on the same day believe it or not,”
Becky: “Uh...wow...how? I’m sorry I don’t mean to be nosey I’ve never heard of that before.”
Panel Six: Candy is laughing
Candy: “Doll it aint no thang to ask. That blank wall over there past the kitchen goes back and that’s the strip club. A while back these two guys came in here and they both were big hunks. One was this tall white super buff guy and the other was this sexy lean black guy. Let’s say things got out of hand for a few of us girls, I still remember that night I honestly don’t know what came over me.”
Becky: “Sounds like it was quite a night.”
PAGE SIX
Panel One: Candy leans in and is whispering at Becky
Candy: “Doll let me tell you something...not to be crude...but both of these guys had the biggest hogs I had ever seen in my life. I swear the both of them got bigger. Especially that buff white guy I swear I saw his grow to the size of my leg when he stumbled out of here.”
Becky: “So they’re the father of you all’s babies?”
Panel Two: Candy continues to whisper
Candy: “I’m not the dating type honestly Doll, and when your girl likes to have some fun I like to keep it super safe. But I can tell you one thing when I see that lean piece of chocolate again, me and him might need to have a talk.”
Panel Three: Candy is back to talking normally and has a notepad with a pen in her hand.
Candy: “Enough about me Doll, I heard you’re getting a comp meal so you’re in for a treat. Are you getting those wings I told you about?”
Becky: “Oh yes I would love to try them, what flavors do they come in?”
Candy: “twelve different ones but since your meal is free mind if I start you off with a two wing sample of each? I can’t even try to to tell you which ones are my favorite. And what to drink for you? And are you getting an appetizer?”
Becky: “Sure! That sounds great. And I will take a sweet tea with some lemon and I might like one but I don’t have a menu.”
Candy: “Oh here I go again running my mouth. I’m sorry Doll I will put your wing sampler in and get you a menu. Give me one sec.”
Panel Four: Becky is sitting at the booth alone, she has a puzzled look on her face as she starts to think.
Becky Thought Bubble: “Tall, buff white guy...hmm...Jamal did say that Mike was back in town. But the lean black guy she mentioned. Was it? No it couldn’t be...he wouldn’t...of course not.”
Panel Five: Aerial POV of Becky looking down at her belly
BEcky Thought Bubble: “He wouldn’t do that to us, what are you thinking girl? That’s crazy.”
Panel Six: Becky is looking at one the pregnant Hoppers Girl’s that’s showing a man to his booth.
Becky Thought Bubble: “Especially with there being four pregnant women here...there’s no way Becky...don’t torture yourself like that.”
PAGE SEVEN
Panel One: Becky sees to of the Hoppers Girl’s talking to one another in the distance and she sees how similarly sized both of their bellies are.
Becky Thought Bubble: “What did Candy say about their...dicks...both of these guys had the biggest hogs I had ever seen in my life. I swear the both of them got bigger.”
Panel Two: *Flash back* Becky is in the doggy style position and Jamal is struggling to make his dick fit.
Becky Thought Bubble: “He has grown a bit…”
Panel Three (SPLIT): For this panel you might need to make it one large panel to fit the split and dialogue.
Split One: Becky see's Candy walking towards her with a smile on her face and a menu in her hand.
Split Two: She imagines Jamal now holding her up, they’re doing a standing sex position where Jamal is holding her legs. His massive dick is in her tight pussy as he’s fucking her hard and her pussy is dripping wet. Candy’s tits are lactating and she’s still holding the menu and her Hoppers shirt is raised showing off her pregnant belly.
Becky Thought Bubble: “Jamal has been acting weird and kind of distant for the past few weeks. He seems like he’s always on edge and about to...burst...Especially when he was on those pills. He was an animal.”
Panel Three: Candy is at the table and is smiling while she holds out the menu for Becky to take. But Becky is paying her no attention.
Candy: “Here you go Doll, those wings are being fried up right now.”
Panel Four: Becky imagines that Candy is laying on her back on Becky’s booth table. Jamal is fucking Candy hard.
Panel FIve (SPLIT):
SPLIT ONE: Becky is looking at Candy’s belly
Jamal: “I’m cumming!”
SPLIT TWO: Candy’s belly starts growing.
Panel Five: Becky is starting at an empty table and Candy is looking at her confused.
Candy: “You all right there Doll?”
Becky Thought Bubble: “He threw those pills out months ago and besides he loves you to much to cheat and you know that. Why would you even think about that? He was the man you lost your virginity too, the man you married and now you’re having his babies. He couldn’t do that to you.”
Panel Six: Becky is looking at Candy with a smile.
Becky: “Oh sorry I zoned out there for a moment, I don’t know where my mind went. Thanks for the menu!”
PAGE EIGHT
Panel One: The restaurant is now full of people and Candy is setting down a plate of small burgers and is holding a tray with wings on it.
Candy: “Well I’ll be doll, the wings were done faster than the mini cheek burgers. Tell me which one is your favorite I like the mango but I love them all.”
Becky: “Thanks! It all smells so good!”
Panel Two: Becky is happily eating the burgers
Becky: “Wow these mini burgers are amazing!”
Panel Three: She bites into the sweet mango and her eyes turn into hearts.
Becky: “Oh...my…”
Panel Four: Becky is devouring the wings and she has sauce all over her fingers
Panel Five: Becky has a wing in her hand and a mini burger, the burger has a bite in it and she’s biting down on the wing.
Panel Six: Rick is watching Becky eat from a distance and Candy is standing next to him.
Rick: “Look at how she’s packing those wings away and the burgers, this might have been a mistake.”
Candy: “Don’t back out now, you told her it was free.”
Rick: “Jeebus...think she might be interested in working at the club? At least I might be able to make some of my food money back.”
Candy: “Have fun with that, it looks like she’s about to take her last bite. Let me go see if she wants any more.”
PAGE NINE
Panel One: Candy is back at the table and Becky is sucking the sauce off of her finger.
Candy: “I told you Doll, those men wouldn’t be lying if they said they came here for some wings.”
Becky: “Oh no you weren’t lying! I need more of them.”
Candy: “which one did you like the best? I can bring you as many of those as you want.”
Becky: “I want the sampler again, but this time bring me thirty six wings. Do you think I could get more of those mini burgers too? I don’t mind paying for them.”
Panel Two: Candy is looking over at Rick whose across the restaurant and is smiling
Candy: “Don’t worry Doll, they’re on the house.”
Panel Three: Candy is setting down a large plate of wings in front of Becky and Becky’s eyes are hearts.
Candy: “Here you go doll the kitchen man mixed up the sampler this time and be careful…”
Panel Four: Becky is biting down into a chicken wing
Candy: “They’re hot.”
Panel Five (SPLIT):
Split One: Becky is eating
Split Two: A large chunk of the wings have been eaten and there are bones left.
Panel Six: POV - A man is looking at Becky’s belly with wide eyes across from her in another booth. Her shirt has come up a little.
PAGE TEN
Panel One: Candy is walking past Rick who looks panicked, they’re both in the kitchen. There are other Hopper Girls with bunny ears taking food in and out and other cooks.
Rick: What are you doing? Why are you bringing her more food!?”
Candy: “That momma is hungry, she’s got eight babies to feed in that belly.”
Panel Two: Candy is about to walk out of the kitchen with the tray of wings in her hand.
Candy: “Plus Rick, take a look around the restaurant especially at your male customers. A few of them are definitely rock hard watching her eat. I’m not going to lie, it’s kind of hot to see.”
Panel Three: Becky’s belly is pressing against the table and Candy is putting down a new plate of wings on the table. There are plates of bones on the table and an unfinished mini burger.
Panel Four (SPLIT):
Split One: Becky takes pushes the table back a little
Split Two: Her shirt is almost half way up her big belly now
Panel Five: Becky’s belly grows a little more as she continues to eat
Becky Thought Bubble: “How could I be so hungry? But it’s so damn GOOD!”
Panel Six: Becky’s shirt raises up higher as her belly gets bigger. One guy is staring at her and has a hard on.
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Panel One: There are four piles of bones on plates on the table, Becky is leaning back and is full and bloated.
Panel Two: POV - Belly shot from the view of the table - Becky is holding her belly and there are piles of chicken bones on plates on the table.
Panel Three: Same POV but Candy is placing a small plate with a slice of cheesecake on Becky’s belly
Panel Four: Becky is looking at Candy with wide eyes
Becky: “Oh no I couldn’t take another bite, I’m so stuffed.”
Candy: “Oh Doll I insist just one small bite, this is some of the best cheesecake you will ever eat. I wasn’t wrong about the wings so take me up on this one.
Panel Five (SPLIT):
Panel One: Candy uses a fork to take a piece of the cheesecake
Panel Two: She’s holding that piece of cheesecake to Becky’s open mouth
Panel Six: Candy is feeding Becky another bite of these cheesecake
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Panel One: POV - zoomed out shot of Candy feeding Becky with her big belly
Candy: “See Dolll...I told you...it’s so...good.”
Panel Two: Becky is looking at Candy with hearts in her eyes and is blushing while she’s chewing
Panel Three: Candy has one last piece of cheesecake on the fork.
Becky: “I don’t know if I can eat it.”
Candy: “Try doll you’ll love it, it’s so sweet and wet...and they say the best is last.”
Panel Four: Becky has hearts in her eyes and takes the last bite, Candy has her hand on Becky’s big belly
Candy: “There you go...I knew you could do it...that cheesecake is on the house doll.”
Panel Five: Becky has a smudge of cheesecake on her mouth
Becky: “Thank you...that was...so...good.”
Panel Six: Candy is wipes the smudge off of Becky’s face.
Candy: “No problem baby doll.
