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Part Four (Revised) WIP
🕑 Added 2022-09-25 16:56:07 +0000 UTCPART FOUR
PAGE ONE
Panel One: * At The Doctor's Office* The Doctor is sitting behind his desk and typing away at his laptop and there’s a knock on the door.
Doctor: “Come in.”
Panel Two: Agent 069 enters the office and is carrying a tablet.
Agent 069: “Sir, you need to see this I gathered some intel on the new subjects.”
Doctor: “Ah yes, I spoke to the wife not to long ago. What do you have to report?”
Panel Three: Agent 069 hands The Doctor the tablet.
Agent 069: “I don’t know if this is bad or not sir, but the female subject was eating heavily yesterday morning.”
Doctor: “Of course she is, she’s pregnant, why would she not eat more?”
Agent 069: “No sir you misunderstand me…I mean that she was eating as if it was her last meal. I got a video of her downing a gallon of milk.”
Panel Four: The Doctor is holding the tablet and he has his hand on his forehead.
Doctor: “Besides the milk, what else was she eating?”
Agent 069: “Enough food to feed five people.”
Doctor: “Where you able to get a visual if her stomach shrank back down afterwards?”
Agent 069: “Yes sir, if you scroll you’ll see the difference. While she did gain she was eating popcorn hours later when the husband came home. Her stomach had gone down quite a bit.”
Panel Five: The Doctor has his hands balled in frustration.
Doctor: “Fuck! FUCK! I was sure of the formula this time, there’s no way this is happening again my calculations were perfect.”
Panel Six: A split cut back to Becky at home vacuuming the carpet in the living room and Jamal is now cumming on the woman's face and her belly is bloated.
Doctor Speech Bubble: “Keep an eye out on anything suspicious with the female subject, she might be dangerous. And let’s make sure nothing out of the ordinary is happening with the male subject as well. Keep a close eye on them.”
PAGE TWO
Panel One: Jamal is laying on the floor exhausted with his dick still out and his shorts around his ankles. The woman is struggling to stand, her face is still messy and it’s all over her clothes.
Woman: “Well that was a bit more than I expected.”
Jamal: “Yeah…*pant*...sorry about that.”
Woman: “How long have you been holding that back? I didn’t even know it was possible to cum like that.”
Panel Two: The woman is now standing and is holding her bloated belly.
Woman: “Me and my girlfriends were going to go out to eat but I don’t think I will be hungry. Seriously how did you cum that much?”
Jamal: “I wish I knew until recently I’ve been blowing loads like that. The womens showers are down the hall and on the right.”
Woman: “Thanks. I think I will get going. See you soon handomsome.”
Panel Three: Jamal is now standing hunched over his desk, he looks exhasuted and is sweating.
Jamal: “That was crazy. I’m so thirsty. My goodness I thought after that last load I blew it would calm down a bit but it’s just as insane as it was before.”
Panel Four: Jamal is holding the past due bill in his hand with a smirk on his face.
Jamal: “well at least I don’t have to worry about you anymore.”
Panel Five: Jamal has pulled up his pants and he looks tired as he’s walking out of his office.
Jamal: “Man I feel so drained, I need a nap but we’ve got hours before I can even think about closing. I’ve got to get out there and help Dan.”
Panel Six: Dan is next to the treadmill while an obese man walks on it, he’s sweating heavily but is smiling and working hard as Dan is coaching him.
Dan: “Brian my guy! Look at you, I told you, man. You’re a beast! Don’t let anyone else tell you otherwise. You were down how much again?”
Man: “Twenty pounds, it’s not much.”
Dan: “Twenty freaking pounds! And this guy says it’s not much. I can’t believe this guy..”
PAGE THREE
Panel One: Dan catches a glimpse of Jamal chugging a bottle of water behind the front desk.”
Dan: “Hey Brian keep at it I will be right back buddy.”
Panel Two: Jamal now has an empty bottle in one hand is chugging another one as Dan comes behind the counter with him.
Dan: “Boss, you okay? No offense but you look terrible. Did you have to fight that lady or something?”
Panel Three: Jamal is looking at Dan with a tired expression as he’s opening another bottle.
Jamal: “Yeah something like that.”
Dan: “That was nuts, that lady was losing it over you. It was like you hypnotized her or something, she was coming at you like a magnet. Where did she go by the way? Did you get rid of her or something?”
Panel Four: Jamal has an annoyed expression on his face. Dan has an arched eyebrow.
Jamal: “I handled it, Dan, that’s all you need to know.”
Dan: “You handled it. Right. Say… how’re the misses doing?”
Jamal: “Good. What makes you ask?”
Panel Five: Dan is now tapping his fingers on the desk as he looks at Jamal.
Dan: “No reason. Is the pregnancy going well? She’s what, a month or two in? It must be exciting.”
Jamal: “How did you know she was pregnant?”
Panel Six: Dan looks confused at Jamal.
Dan: “Seriously? Are you okay? I really mean that. For the past few weeks, you’ve been like a zombie. One minute you’re back and then the next you were spaced out. I know because you kept saying, I can’t believe we're having a baby. So far you seem to be back to normal but you’re still acting weird.”
Jamal: “Yeah sorry. I guess it’s just stress. She’s good, thanks for asking.”
PAGE FOUR
Panel One: Dan and Jamal both look as the woman Jamal got a blow job from is leaving. Her hair is wet from the shower, and she has a towel slung over her shoulders. She’s wearing a sports and her yoga pants are barely covering the bottom half of her bloated sloshing belly.
Woman: “Thanks for the extended session. I can’t wait to come back for more, chow!”
Panel Two: Dan has a smug look on his face.
Dan: “Wow. You know what boss? It’s a slow day, I’ve got this under control. Why don’t you take the rest of the day off?”
Jamal: “No it’s fine. I don’t need the day off.”
Dan: “Okay that’s fine, but I do. So I will see you tomorrow.”
Panel Three: Jamal starts chugging an energy drink and he still looks tired.
Jamal thought bubble: “Who does Dan think he is to judge me like that? He doesn’t know what he’s talking about, all of the stress I’ve been going through.”
Panel Four: Jamal is trying to coach the obese man on the treadmill but the man doesn’t look impressed and Jamal looks tired.
Panel Five: Jamal is going around the gym and isn’t able to keep up.
Panel Six: Jamal is looking at a clock.
Jamal: “It’s only been an hour and I’m still tired, how’s that possible? These energy drinks aren’t doing anything for me like they used to.”
PAGE FIVE
Panel One:
PAGE ONE (_DirtyMac)
Panel One: POV of a bathroom mirror that’s steamy, there is a shadow of a man in the mirror. (This shadow needs to have some resemblance of a silhouette of a horse character for the reveal.
Jamal Speech Bubble: “Ah it feels good to be nice and clean.”
Panel Two: Jamal wipes the mirror and looks horrified that he realizes he’s a horse.
Jamal: “What the fuck!?”
Becky Speech Bubble: “What’s wrong sweetie”
Panel Three: Jamal looks down and sees his horse dick.
Jamal: “I’m a HORSE!?”
Becky Speech Bubble: “Yeah I know and I’m waiting for my big horse to get his ass in here!”
Panel Four (SPLIT):
Split One: Jamal is reaching into the medicine cabinet, the open medicine cabinet has the FertileMax pill bottle in it.
Split Two: Jamal is holding the pill bottle in his hand.
Jamal: “What’s happening to me? Am I hallucinating?”
LAST PAGE: Becky and Jamal are laying next to each other. Jamal’s dick has flopped over his leg and cum is everywhere. Becky is still inflated.
