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(Super Sales 2)Chapter 5: Insane Devotion

🕑 Added 2017-09-24 14:26:08 +0000 UTC

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William D. Arand

Because she asked him not to.

Leaf

Why doesn't Felix 'negatively' upgrade Miu? As in remove the 'everything is twice as powerful' and replace it with 'most are twice as powerful'. Even just removing the part where feeling are stronger would probably result in felix getting single use points out of it, like turning gold into dirt.

DiabolicalGenius

Thanks, this is a good one. Though he's lucky she's the type of yandere that turns her darkness on their women who get close to him, and not the type turns it on himself for cheating on her. What would she do to him if he was planning to abandon her for the other girls? "If I can't have you, no-one can......." followed by a bloody death and cannibalism. So he'll be a part of her forever? I hope she's not that bad of a yandere......

Robert Shofner

Could you imagine what would happen if he asked the yandere side of miu to go out hunting for answers?

Great chapter! I like what happened with Miu.

I can just imagine the havok that Felix could create if he hires Neutralizer and powers him up to not affect Felix's employees but still affect his enemies!

Tsundere: <a href="http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Tsundere" rel="nofollow noopener" target="_blank">http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/Tsundere</a>

Ryan

Felix is sempie

“Miu, stop! We don’t need to kill her. A corpse is the last thing we need,” Felix said, pressing his hands to her side. I think we've killed about 3 people by now. Unless you are trying to say killing on Neutralizer's territory is bad, then I get it. There are also some minor issues that your editor should be able to spot and fix. I'm glad you've expanded Miu's backstory. I couldn't picture her that well in the first book. Now she feels more solid after this chapter. Awesome.

Iori Daemona Angel

I hear you Bro

William D. Arand

Miu is fun :)

Iori Daemona Angel

Ok... now I have two favorite person in this story!


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