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(Super Sales 2)Chapter 6: Catching up

🕑 Added 2017-09-29 14:10:31 +0000 UTC

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William D. Arand

Maybe. :) Confusing is alright... Make ya work at it. lol

Chase

I have read WWEE, but despite having loved the first Super Sale I didn't put it together at the time. Here I didn't either until I read the comments. So.. That's a thing. The descriptions and lead up to the portal opening are confusing and the descriptions of events that occured with the portal are confusing. That is to say, please more description on what the other side looked like, and a less confusing lead up since at first they seemed to know it was going to happen.

YayPepto

:< 4chan isn't terrible anymore... It's just filled with a lot of cancer...

DiabolicalGenius

That crossover scene finally came. I was waiting for it. Nice to see it's more than just a cameo, and that it's actually influencing Felix' actions. Though if you're switch scenes can't you do something to indicate it? It was a bit confusing reading along, then belatedly realising we weren't where we were a few lines ago. Also, it's surprising that he didn't know what a yandere was, yet apparently is quite familiar with 4chan......

Kitsone

Yes, that was Vince, Red, and Blue from Wild Wastes: Eastern Expansion. I was expecting this scene.

Other side of the portal is in WW2 Chapter 19, early access version is at <a href="https://www.patreon.com/posts/wild-wastes-19-13849320">https://www.patreon.com/posts/wild-wastes-19-13849320</a> .

Iori Daemona Angel

Wow wait? Was that Red from Wild Waste?!

Phallusar

It's a scene from Wild Wastes: Eastern Expansion. Felix and Vince reference each other in their respective books.

I'm a bit confused at the end did Lily and Andrea know what was going to happen with the portal opening? They were they were standing there beside Felix gave me that impression. If not, you might have them be in the middle of a conversation and then the portal opens interrupting them. What do you mean by road stained? The pale beast girl jumped on top of a control panel? Was that in the office with Felix or inside the portal? I didn't hear any description about the room other than there was a machine. Did the green mist that entered their office leave any lingering effects or smells. Also probably at the end instead of Felix barking orders, I would have had Andrea calling in security and Lily doing the same but calling Kit while Felix to ponders on what he has just seen. These are thoughts of course.

Nice. Opened up a lot of ideas.


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