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(Super Sales 2)Chapter 1: What They Understand

🕑 Added 2017-09-03 18:44:47 +0000 UTC

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"Felix said getting to his feet. Feeling around in his mouth with his tongue he could taste copper. Taking aim, she spat up a mouth full of blood onto the table." Taking aim, he*

William D. Arand

Probably me fudging a number. ;) This is why I hire an editor when I'm done with the 2nd pass. I miss stuff like this.

DiabolicalGenius

Thanks for the prequel chapter. I'm quite looking forward to the whole book. Expanding the business to a city that isn't taken over by villains is a surprise. He may not see himself as a one, but I pretty much all the cops and heroes will see is a new supervillain on the rise. Also on the table under Felicia's Direct Reports, is says 14,125 recieved, but 0 spent and 1,600 remaining, which doesn't add up. Is it meant to be that way?


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