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Reversal -CH3-

🕑 Added 2020-05-05 17:00:37 +0000 UTC

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ItWasIDIO!!

Definite 2 vibes from Jamie

ItWasIDIO!!

Definitely needs continuing

Steven Alexander

So far I was seeing a growing emotional bond with Phillip and Mildred. Then I read: “No, no, that’s not it. That’s not it at all. I’m just… flattered, I guess. Thank you Mildred. Guess that makes you my first partner,” Phillip said after a second. And this – right after he got married to Alice. He calls Mildred his FIRST partner. And then: “I’m not married, Phillip. Nor have I ever been engaged. I’m only a year older than you are, you know.” And then there were two: “Ah… we haven’t formally been introduced,” the woman admitted with a soft laugh. “I’m Lenore.” This is like the teacher stomping his foot while explaining something just before a quiz. FORESHADOWING.

Dam you, he’s going to be killed now.

James Hervey

You are doing a great job on this one I can't wait for more.

For what it’s worth I would say another pen name also if this goes forward. There is a certain expectation of what an author writes, and people freak when that is not met. This is great I’ve already formed an idea of what the world is like. The books I like always suck you in during the first few chapters.

Hellnhavoc

yeah i have to agree, if it ends up falling out side that verse a disclaimer will be helpful to readers/fans. I like it a lot so far. Very curious to see where he is going with this.

Darwin Baide

I am intrigued, Phillip knows whats up

Nicholas Donovan

This is interesting and I can see a hint about how the book might have a 'reversal' of how the society acts, or Phillip's situation, and whether this is or is not a sovereign verse book, or under a third pen name this book looks good :)

William D. Arand

I'll keep that in mind, but given the state of the world and timeframe, the ages are likely to remain the same. :)

Sandmanslimz

i would make Mildred aleast 4 year older i dont know if you said the age of Phillip but makeing Mildred only a year older and saying she fought in a war what at 14 15 year old and she also act more mature than a late teen early 20 year old would its not a big deal but i took me out of it abit.

Drew Risch

Fuck yeah Phil my man, buy the whole fucking country right out from under these aristocratic fucks!

Jaymes Wiles

Keep it coming. This story seems pretty good so far.

Timithy klesick

This is good. its got really good i wish you to continue this story. please and thank you

Gavin

Loving it I hope to see the series bloom regardless of it's relation to other series.

Jake Minor

Love it! I am getting a bit attached to Phillip so I do hope you keep posting this story.

Mitchell L. Redinger

So, i do like this. Quite a bit in fact. I will say that if this doesn't tie in with the Sovereignverse that if not a disclaimer, then definitely a new pen name would be best, only because I can already see people getting confused and butt hurt about it and I don't think we want to see that. However, I do enjoy it and certainly want to see much more of this Phillip, and how it plays out.


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