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Right of Retribution 3 -CH4-

🕑 Added 2021-09-15 03:40:47 +0000 UTC

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Atom Smashes

Is this one after the conclusion of swing shift? I'm a little fuzzy on the timing

Yotedom

I want mark to take up with this comment ^^^

P M

Yeah mark shines in this chapter. I liked the nick names though. Kind of makes mark look like a less crazy more likeable kanye west... I like to pronounce yies like yee zee. Notthing about the dialoge or spelling sugests it in any way, but it rymes whith cheesey which is also yellow and makes me chuckle in my head...

Nicholas Donovan

I want to see Mark in meetings with all the MC's just for the hilarity of Mark being Mark with all the other characters. Especially since if you know them and how they would act around him. Oh the little bits of comedy to help break up all the seriousness. Him and Runner would be besties in minutes.

David Fletcher

Great chapter, terrible nicknames. Wings and Yies? Oof. And I can’t do better. Just saying. Mark is the best. He’s like Andrea and Lilly as one person.


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