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Super Sales on Super Heroes 5 -CH15-

🕑 Added 2022-06-24 03:44:00 +0000 UTC

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Stephen Chernishoff

I definitely understand and reading the last few chapters till this one, a lot is going on and coming together. I won't deny it was rushed with the elimination of this villain, but that's just me being selfish since I know it was named after me :D. If I discard my personal attachment, it was a plot hole that needed to be closed. It was still rushed, but that worked in its own favor. The fact that this villain was no longer in scope with the major plot and it didn't add much else to the story, a quick elimination is a great way of portraying this imo. Regardless of how he was ended, I was still super happy to have my name included with Felix. Which is one of my favorite characters! So knowing I was able to be included when others are still waiting their turn, makes me even more grateful :). So again, thank you Will!

William D. Arand

Sometimes I can keep characters around. Sometimes not. I haven't been able to add a single "extra" character this entire book. o_0

Stephen Chernishoff

Ah I held on to a sliver of hope that Stephen is still going rampant, but this chapter pretty much confirmed his death. A bit swift and rushed to be honest, but I can see the need to move on to the meaty bits of the plot! Thank you again for including me in your story, truly honored :).

Eloren Koori

I mean, I just assumed one of the dryads she’s been sending.

Eliseo Rios

Not gonna lie, when she said burning spot, the first thing that came to my mind was Centralia Pennsylvania, that would certainly be something that Gaia would like taken care of lol Mild criticism, though. When talking about Gaia's representatives, they were not described at all. Like how many where they, what species, that sort of things made that scene seem rushed

Jeremy Patrick

Just because they existed and Vince is aware doesnt mean that anyone brought it to Felix's attention. So he could still reasonably just not know.

Jeremy Patrick

If Gaia ends up his wife wouldnt he pretty much own earth at that point? Lol I would think she has more authority than any government.

Peter

Assuming Felix does take Auntie Gaia as a wife. How many points will he gain? Will he be able to improve her powers to enable her to better heal herself? Better yet, enable her to better collect the impurities harming her for Felix to convert to points? Also, as she heals will she provide Felix with more points?

Peter

Nuclear cleanup sounds like a very profitable business. Felix offers to exchange getting rid of the radioactivity for ownership of the land. He'll need to own the land to alter the land itself. Assuming some sort of conservation of energy applies to his power, he can transmute the high-level waste into stable elements he can use yet still generates points. He can use intermediate-level and low-level waste as points or as building materials for his base expansion beneath the reclamation site. This would also work for something like Chernobyl. The surface can be returned to pristine wilderness. I wonder if Felix will do something similar with landfills. Offer the waste management company a reduce price to get rid of the waste in exchange for ownership of the land. Then dig a deep hole the WM company can dump waste into. The contents get transmuted into points regularly. The hole is a small portion of the surface area, and the rest of the surface is returned to pristine wilderness. He can still build underground. If you are headed that way, very nice Will!

Kenneth Darlin

What about the town in the US that has the coal mine that is permanently on fire? That could count as well

KiwiHermit

Heh, Chernobyl's gonna be a doozy. And I'm all for Felix getting it on with Gaia. Ticks a couple of check boxes there in my mind: -Vince has the goddesses of Dragons and Dryads, it's only fair that Felix gets a deity wife too. -She's frikkin MOTHER EARTH, that's like ultimate milf right there.

Drew Risch

Hahaha, Chernobyl, oh fuck! Good ol' Чорнобильський will either be a giant boon or a giant headache for Felix, I think.

Loukemia

Vince would be aware of succubi as would Sameerixis but Felix hasn't run into one...as far as he knows.

Nicholas Donovan

Just to point out, just in case it slipped by, in book one of wild wastes Vince does meet a succubi in the auction house party/annual stratagy meeting that he steals the vouchers from and meets Seville face to face and actually has a chat with him. I'm sure there would have been either rumors about succubi or a few in Yosemite at that point, as they were considered wasters. Just pointing it out. :)


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