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Overclocked -ch 19-

🕑 Added 2022-10-06 16:29:31 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

I appreciate you keeping the characters believable. It helps with the immersion.

William D. Arand

Gotta keep characters within their limits :D

DiabolicalGenius

Complete lack of education is a pain, relying purely on experience aside from his Fixer knowledge which is a combination of some kind of genetically engineered instinct and experience. Means everything he knows about anatomy is through experience. Knows he has a heart cause he can feel it beating, knows he has lungs as he can feel them filling with air, knows if anything happens to either most humes die soon enough. Anything else is kinda vague. Getting hit in the head is bad but doesn't always kill someone. The neck is the most vulnerable area and easiest to kill someone when targeted. Things like that. The locations of arteries or knowing that twisting the neck hard enough can snap the spinal cord and kill or permanently cripple them is stuff he really needs to be taught. Makes sense. A lot of people take their education for granted along with the sheer amount of data the internet puts at your fingertips and are happy to call any character who acts like this dumb since it's "obvious". Really think that they'd still have figured out everything they know even if no-one taught them all on their own. Which ironically, is pretty damned ignorant.

Jeremy Patrick

The flying elbow attacks were a little rough to picture. Fun fight just hard to visualize. Might just be me tho.

Alex Lindsay

Thanks for the chapter! Enjoyed the fight!


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