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🕑 Added 2022-10-06 16:29:50 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

That was interesting, though I'm a bit concerned about Small-boy. Seems like the resistance is made up of as many people driven by a grudge against the Tongsta as the desire for freedom and to help humes in general. Maybe more. Plus this kind of group tends to be bound by a common enemy and have an Us vs. Them mentality and don't appreciate anyone neutral. You're either with them or against them. I'm worried he'll get injured during the Games, be dependent on the mender to heal him, only for Small to try to get rid of him out of paranoia instead. Feels like the moment Wrench implied he knew where their base was, he started viewing him as a threat. Pretty much any Resistance would take the view that no-one who knows where they hide should exist who isn't a part of them after all.

Michael Jackson

I want to know what goodies goodie gets him, more intelligent humes or does he find he can get upgrades to himself like intelligent boosters for his cranial device, the more he learns about the tongsta the more he can tell the resistance. My personal reason is i bet we fucked the world up they saved us and thats why we are seen like pets as no reasonable intelligent pet shits in its own cage if it can help it, yet we as a species dump tons of shit into the environment and think its someone elses problem daily, sorry for the rant lol had a greta moment.

Drew Risch

I miss Stripe!

Alex Lindsay

I don’t mind curb stomping if it is done well. But I’m not sure it was quite a curb stomp as Wrench seemed awkward when it came to the wrestling moves that weren’t quite working. Either way I personally am enjoying the story a lot.

Kyle Stitt

Lol making friends everywhere he goes, I hope stripe is ok I’m excited to see how their relationship evolves

William D. Arand

Part of the appeal to Wrench is that he is OP but also not OP. Not all fights will be one sided, but some will be. This kind of uncertainty is part of creating proper tension. As to it being a simple "base building" story, where he just works on the Hab, that'd be... I don't really write those really well. Closest I got was Dungeon Deposed and I had Ryker leaving a lot. Just so I could facilitate a more interesting story. lol. Yes, he works on the Hab, no, he doesn't do it exclusively.

Peter

Brain fart! Sorry Will.

William D. Arand

Who's John?

Peter

I hope you skip the fight scenes if Wrench just executes a series of curb stomps, John. I'd much rather read about how he puts together his Hab and how the resistance tries to re-recruit him. Seeing Chuckles progress in some way would also be interesting.

Alex Lindsay

Interesting. I wonder if he said too much about the resistance?


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