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Save State -Ch5-

🕑 Added 2022-11-19 03:20:15 +0000 UTC

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kir44n

Dorothy coming back is an amazing call back to one of the earliest books. Absolutly dig it.

Larry

After the last few books, every time Edmund loads a save state I expect him to hear a horrible grinding noise and have Ryker show up all pissed off telling him to stop breaking his world.

Peter

Concur. Now we have an Edmund sandwich between slices of pumpernickel and honey wheat. Not sure how that will taste yet, but one suspects it will be worthwhile. Of course Dot is the slice of honey wheat.

Alex Lindsay

I’ll admit this is the first chapter that really grab my interest. The others were fine but just felt a bit so-so compared to where Wrench left off. Now I feel my excitement for the story really beginning to build.

Peter

Autocortupt sucks! Ryker.

James Domec

The first rule of auto correct club is....

William D. Arand

Who's Tyler

Peter

Oooooh, Dot is related to Rob! I bet Ryker is both very happy and still so annoyed he let the SOB go.

David Fletcher

Dorothy makes me think of Dot.

Stephen Chernishoff

Ooooh DOT! Yay, I was hoping she would show up again! I actually forgot about Rob I had to go back and find out who he was haha. And really curious to see how powerful Alina is. Wasn't given justice in RoR when you have Warner's massive shadow to overcome. And damn, Andrea with the foreshadowing lmao. Really enjoying this so far, I can't wait to see all the big names come together!!

Thomas Todd

Isn't Rob the guy Ryker hated but let live because he was an agent of the crown?

William D. Arand

Yeah... who's Rob...

Drew Risch

Who's Rob? Do we know them? I don’t remember Dorothy but I feel like I should...

Drfman

I'm pretty sure Dorthy is Dot. We finally get to see her all grown up after all this time.


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