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🕑 Added 2022-09-08 00:55:56 +0000 UTC

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Jim Payne

Lol samurai jack

kir44n

Yeah, I can definitely see Wrench being some sort of Campbell, him not having a twin brother rules out Miles or Felix's Dad. Could help establish where Miles cutthroat outlook came from. Also, I can't decide if that was Runner or Ryker that popped in. No crap castle references, so probably not Runner XD

Jeremy Patrick

Huh

Thomas Todd

My only consideration was that he's meant to have a twin, if Wrench is his Grandfather then he could have twin boys. Alternatively Miles might not have a twin, it might be another Wrench from one of these scenarios

James Domec

I was thinking that Wrench is Miles. I could see Miles as someone that would nuke a population.

Thomas Todd

And Vince's ability to empower himself through consuming things is linked in some ways as well. My theory is that Miles has a very similar ability, he uses I to turn himself into a super computer so he can predict the future and empowers him physically to fight

Drew Risch

Felix's ability to change everything he owns is similar Wrenches ability to change himself. Could be a genetic component there, who knows.

Thomas Todd

My current theory is that Wrench is Mile's Father, so Vince and Felix's Grandfather

clinton cuzzort

Damn that’s a good title. Looking forward to more chapters.

Drew Risch

What ever happened to that one story you started where the guy's spaceship crashed, and he had what was basically a matter synthesizer that could make anything with enough time and energy (and matter)? That story sounded really fun!

Drew Risch

This looks really interesting. It's also terrifying because this future is one of the more likely outcomes if intelligent life finds us first. Especially if they're much more strong and intelligent than us. They'd look at us the way we look at dogs and cats, and they might not exactly be wrong, depending on how smart they are. One question though, how exactly did Wrench make the connection that the ship/station he was blowing up wasn't the government? Why did meeting his former master there clue him in? Would his former master not normally be involved in government stuff? If not why? Maybe I missed it but I didn't see what clues him in enough to ask (riker?) about it.

David Hoerner

That was an interesting chapter 1. Great chapter! Hope we get more than that. 😀


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