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Overclocked -Ch5-

🕑 Added 2022-09-14 22:51:49 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

Totally feels like Goodie is a teenage girl who rescued a stray animal being tormented by her big brothers and decided to fix him up and adopt him. I'm sure she's going to watch him fix up that habitat she put him in and decide he needs friends. And since the vet said he'd make a great breeder, wouldn't bringing in a few females make him happy? Anything for her cute little Wrenchy. Cause he's just adooooorable, yes he is. Yes he is. * cooing teenage girl noises * In any case, it's a better position then he was in before. For now. Let's hope he's not a puppy for christmas, eh?

Michael Jackson

Could be a dna resequenceing or maybe nanite injection i bet they have augmented humes plus these demes seem to be bred like race horses for looks. Ive just had a thought i wonder if the aliens are actually us but evolved into what they are because of a catastrophic event and they are trying to get there humanity back by experimenting on degraded versions to make a super human they could transfer into?

kir44n

This is fantastic. As soon as it described the ca..."hume" carrier, I knew they were going to a Vet. And it played out just like taking a skittish cat to the vet. Just dying with laughter. Good stuff. This is why W.D.A is my favorite harem-lit author

William D. Arand

Some are much larger, some are smaller. All are bigger than humans by a significant margin.

Kevin McGuire

So am I the only one who's not sure how large the tongstas are. Like I keep going between a bit bigger then a human to godzilla size

Drew Risch

Interesting, I wonder why the pain block didn't work. Unless maybe what they're doing is re-ordering Wrench's body into the desired form. If they did that, it would adjust his nerves back to factory presets too, getting rid of his block. I love this book so much. The weird pet dynamic is equally comical and horrifying

nathrielos

I love this book some about just scratches a mental itch. awesome chapter.

Loukemia

I may have made a hampster joke last chapter but this all feels closer to an aquarium. The designer Hume (deme) is a bit auspicious and I'm wondering how long until we run into one and what the overclock ability might do with that.

Peter

So far this reminds me of an ASPCA commercial. We just left Michael Vick's cousin and a dog fight. Now the poor abused pup is being saved and looked after. Please donate so we can save more mistreated animals.

David Hoerner

Can't wait for Goodie to start adding more people to this new and huge habitat. Great chapter!

Alex Lindsay

This is going well! I’m enjoying the story so far. Keep it up!


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