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🕑 Added 2022-09-16 02:40:44 +0000 UTC

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Michael Jackson

I woder if they are farming them for food or feeding the humes to other alien species the buzzing could be different aliens like swarming bees

William D. Arand

Realistically, it's possible that I over-sold the implant and it was just meant to be a subtle minor plot point. I can add a few more lines in somewhere earlier on in the book. That might help. Maybe more to chapter 1? More to what's already there? There's already a good bit in chapter one explaining it. "While he’d long since deactivated all the control portions of the implant, it would nonethless always act as a translator. That was something he could never turn off. Some implants were better than others, or it came down to the individual, as not all implants managed to translate what was said. There were some that could only get a few words, some that got sentences, and yet others that got it all. It was all a variable dependent on the person. "

James Breaux

This is my only real hang up. Seems like wrench has understood what they are saying even in his past life. It must just be him, but I would like an explanation on the matter.

Jeremy Patrick

This is so strange. But a good strange? Lol. It feels fun but just thinking about being a pet like this makes me shudder.

James E. Coleman

Definitely hooked on this one.

Thomas Todd

Part of me finds the Tongsta strangely endearing. They don't seem evil (so far) but literally see us as pets, no different to how we treat dogs.

Alex Lindsay

I agree that this is really shaping up to be a fun story!

James Breaux

Really enjoying OC so far. Can't wait for more!

Drew Risch

More more more more more!

Drew Risch

This is like seriously the most interesting thing I've ever read. Or maybe tied. I didn't realize only he could understand them. Does only he have the implant? Earlier chapters made it sound like they all had implants. Or is it because the others don’t have the updated firmware? But even before that Goodie praised him for understanding her better than normal, so it has to be more than that, right?

Nicholas Donovan

This series seems interesting, was the man in the first chapter who I think it was?


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