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🕑 Added 2022-09-19 23:51:55 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

This is probably the most interesting story you've written in some time. Not in the sense that your other writing is lacking, just that nothing grabbed my attention quite like this has. I definitely like it more than The Axe Falls. I'm very interested to see how it goes. Right now I see things going in a nice direction for now with habitat building and getting to pick out a harem. But I'm sure he'll get in trouble sooner or later. Probably due to Goodie being so damn proud of him. All some other Tongsta will have to do is say he killed that maneating thing by a fluke and that he won't stand a chance against their pet hume (or another maneating alien), and he'll suddenly find himself in a battle to the death. Because her Good Boy couldn't possibly lose, could he?

Michael Jackson

Loving the story and finding out we are probably nothing more than pets to the aliens, lets hope the tale unfolds more favourably towards wrench and he gets more exotic humes.

kir44n

It seems like Wrench might be similar to Sam and Felix and not be terribly receptive to having children. While it makes sense that not everyone is going to try to repopulate the world like Vince, it would be nice to see someone other then Vince and Runner have kids. (I think Ryker has been implied to have more children since Bianca, but I don't recall seeing any of them featured)

deadeyemax

Enjoying this one so far. Very interesting. Fresh.

Nick Cartwright

Is it “deems” or “dehms”. I’d assume the former because it’s coming from designer.

Alex Lindsay

I’m always read this immediately when i get the notification. I can’t wait to see where this is going!

David Hoerner

Minor typo, you have "tru" instead of "true". Great chapter though!

Nicholas Donovan

I almost want a size for the hab to compare to buildings plus any open land areas, because I'm imagining a hospital, or something like a target Walmart or Fred Myers size wise.

Drew Risch

This is so weird, I love it. They even have a fucking litter tray under them, like a damn rabbit hahahaha

Logan Carl

This is an odd story. Not sure where you're going to go with it. But it's entertaining.


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