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Save State Hero -ch25-

🕑 Added 2023-01-11 04:28:22 +0000 UTC

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Georg Kranz

Runner restored the medical server and transferred them over.

Nick Cartwright

I could have sworn Zeus was made to kill runner in order to shut down the server. Am I misremembering details?

Nick Cartwright

What ever happened to all the players? Has that ever been addressed? Maybe it’s something that I’ve forgotten ver the years.

Georg Kranz

I'm becoming more and more certain that Os doesn't say Edmund is Edmund but Edmund is Admin, but why should Edmund be an admin?

Brian

Thanks! I hope you are enjoying the readers really getting into the details of your stories. We certainly are. :-)

William D. Arand

I totally did delete it. I also knew that you'd -get- my message because i'd sent it. I do that sometimes so that people can get a response from me, but it doesn't linger. Especially if it's me giving out information or disagreeing. I don't want people to think they can't disagree with me. I'd rather leave the counter points up, and delete my responses. Does that make any sense? I'm probably just being werid.

Brian

Mr. Arand, you made a reply but it is no longer there? You mentioned that it fits her mentality correctly. So, you wouldn't change it. Also, the fact that it generates so much discussion makes you want to keep it even more. Sounds good! You, obviously know the characters and the needs of the story much better than us arm-chair quarterback readers. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story and thoroughly enjoying it! Thank you for listening to us, though.

Brian

Still fun to read, though. :-)

Brian

To me, Dot's response to Edmunds question "What happens if Runner dies?" just doesn't ring true. I know she's exhausted, distracted, and focused on what they need to do, but she's got extremely high personal stakes here. More along the lines of, "Are you kidding me? Other than we all die, including the obnoxious man that saved my life more times than I can count? Zeus may leave the rest of the people to rot, but anyone fighting for Runner will be ended as efficiently as possible." I would have really expected that question to trigger Dot faster than a Karen being deprived of her morning Starbucks. All rights to above thoughts are fully granted to William D. Arand without reservation or limits. Just in case.

William D. Arand

I legit read every comment anyone makes. :D

Alex Lindsay

Thanks for the response. Things are “Getting Real” now! :)

William D. Arand

Assumption of a common knowledge base. :) Dot made a boo-boo. That and really Zeus -does- only want to kill Runner. The rest is a non-matter to him

Alex Lindsay

So interesting that they aren’t telling Edmund much about negative results of Runner losing. Since this all started when Runner and all were being threatened to being shutdown, it appears a strangely mild description.

William D. Arand

Fixed to "Warner and Gus"

Stephen Chernishoff

I was gonna say, isn't Rene introduced twice?

Drfman

So glad we finally get to see the actual fight. So many books leading up to this point. I am wondering if this series will show a fraction of it from Edmunds perspective and the WW and SSOSH will give us others.

David Fletcher

“Rene and Gus are… elsewhere. You probably won’t meet them but they’re working on something else,” Should that be Warner? I like that Edmund thinks about what the real fight is, whether he’s on the right side of things, and the greater implications of it all.


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