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Strike3

would like a alternative ending where the hero turns the table and somehow drinks up the slime

Subtleside

I really enjoyed this is well! This style of game is really great. I was a big fan of snack story and I love where this game is going. Your writing is nice and descriptive, so I'd be totally fine without any artwork for this game. I think this is really interesting, and I hope you decide to make more!

3dArtFan

Nice to see the adventure game make a return. The writing is nice, though I think if you want to keep people engaged maybe have a small window at the bottom-centre of the screen between the arrows and map. It does defeat the purpose of avoiding making art for it, though I'd help make it a long term format for different stories (a bit like a fighting fantasy adventure). It can display a static image of characters you run into once they fully reveal themselves in the scene, accompanied by audio when needed, then remove it once the main character moves on. (No background or a set of images to animate the character, just one still image. Could even be just be shaded black and white) Besides that, great to see you making things and keep up the good work.

Dragon

I really like it. It's a nice little spiritual successor to Snack Story and I would love for it to get continued. I know the game is mostly text-based but I think some audio would be nice. Nothing major of course, but it could be something similar to Snack Story where audio plays when you go to a next location, someone burps, stomach gurgles, etc. Overall, very good and I hope to see more.

Des 24242424

Super looking forward to more of this idea

Delta-M

I'm a fan. Keep at it when you've got the time.

Arin Williams

For the text game maybe having art for a location to set a mood and then maybe for characters just have a journal like tab for a basic image and a description of their appearance

Cassie, Woman of Culture

Just played through the text game, seems pretty good! It's cool to see your writing talent as well as your art. I'd certainly be interested to see more of this, though I do think some sound effects, even small ones for progressing text or moving rooms, would be welcome (since you asked if people would want sounds). Whatever you do next, put yourself first! Hope you're doing okay.


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