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Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2023-09-22 20:56:44 +0000 UTC

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Valorious Prophet

Haha, good catch. There was definitely more going on then it seemed.

Mylael

Great chapter. I am curious about his reaction at the end, he probably got her with a compound coating the leg, seeing as he cleared his debt to her first, so I'm looking forward to seeing what she got hit with!

Valorious Prophet

...he's been constantly studying on Kryptonian physiology. When he got back to the tower one of the first things he did was check on on the textbook he got. He spends a lot of his time researching it. It's just not an easy thing to fix.

Pope Yoda I

MC is becoming more of an unlikable asshole the longer this story progresses. A team member - one who saved his life - is in literal agony and, besides fucking around for several weeks, he continues to stall and do fuck all? While lying about their condition? Really? You're going out of your way to make this character look like an irresponsible asshole. I'm not sure if that's intentional or not. If not, his thoughts processes really need to be a part of the dialogue. There are enough unlikable assholes in fiction. This is immensely frustrating, as it had almost looked like MC was making progress as a human being.


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