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The Dark Apprentice Chapter 60
🕑 Added 2025-11-18 06:45:00 +0000 UTCChapter 60
Arriving in a place Harry instantly recognized, a jolt of something akin to grim amusement shot through him. He had to fight the chuckle that nearly escaped his lips, a sound that would undoubtedly seem unhinged to his would be captors. The sheer, delicious irony of it all! These imbeciles, these misguided fools, had actually brought him agonizingly close to his true home. Not Privet Drive, not some Dursley-esque prison, but the place where his magic truly thrived, where he felt a deeper connection than anywhere else. And even better, Tom would be nearby. The thought of his mentor, a man who had grown to be like a father figure, sent a ripple of anticipation through him.
They were, undoubtedly, in Little Hangleton. The familiar chill of the air, the unique scent of the earth, and the subtly oppressive atmosphere that clung to the village like a shroud all confirmed it. Just over the gentle swell of a verdant hill, Harry could distinctly see the restored version of Gaunt Manor. It stood there, a testament to Tom’s enduring power and his unwavering commitment to his ancestry, rebuilt from its dilapidated state into something imposing and grand, a beacon of dark majesty in the mundane landscape. Its dark stone walls seemed to hum with a malevolent energy, signs of the parselmagic Tom inlay into it, and Harry felt a magnetic pull towards it, a sense of belonging he rarely experienced anywhere else. His heart, or what was left of it, quickened with a perverse joy. His escape, it seemed, was not just possible, but practically preordained.
“Potter!” A man nearby exclaimed, and Harry’s eyes shot towards a trio of figures, all in Death Eater garb, and felt his wand slip through his fingers, as the disarming spell struck him.
“Gentlemen.” Harry greeted, “You have no idea of the mistake you are making.”
Cackling with a chilling, synchronized laughter, the trio of dark figures offered no explanation, no taunt, just the menacing sound that echoed in the oppressive silence. Suddenly, an unseen, yet undeniably potent, force seized Harry. It was as if invisible hands had reached out and latched onto him, their grip unyielding. He was sent spiraling backwards, a helpless puppet yanked by unseen strings, his world blurring into a dizzying vortex of motion.
The relentless backward momentum ceased abruptly, replaced by the crushing sensation of something massive pressing down upon him. It was a weight unlike any he had ever experienced, not a physical burden, but a suffocating pressure that seemed to steal the very breath from his lungs. He felt the cold, unyielding embrace of the scythe of the reaper, the silent, sentinel that stood watch over the desecrated Riddle family grave. Its concrete blade acted as a cruel trap, snaring him within its grasp. His arms, despite his desperate struggles, were suspended above him, held captive by the scythe.
It took every ounce of his willpower to fight the overwhelming instinct to lash out. A burning desire pulsed through his veins: to reclaim his wand, to feel the familiar weight of the holly and phoenix feather in his grip, and to unleash a torrent of hexes and curses upon these audacious men who dared to impede his path. He yearned to see them scatter, to hear their cries of fear and pain as he cut them down, one by one.
Yet, despite the furious tempest raging beneath his calm exterior, he meticulously crafted the mask of a terrified child. His eyes widened, reflecting a feigned innocence, while his lower lip trembled ever so slightly, as if on the verge of tears. Every muscle in his body, though screaming for action, was held in a carefully controlled stillness, conveying the very essence of vulnerability. He was playing the actor, a crucial role in what was coming. Tom's instructions had been clear, precise, and utterly unforgiving: to be seen as nothing more than a helpless, frightened boy, a pawn easily manipulated, rather than the formidable, dangerous wizard he truly was. And so, with a theatrical flair that belied the fury churning within, he surrendered to the illusion, allowing himself to be perceived as a terrified child, utterly at the mercy of his captors.
The tallest of the three men approached, and Harry watched as the man raised his wand to his face, and removed the mask, leaving a black fog in his wake, “Harry Potter. My son…does not have pleasant things to say about you.”
The blonde hair, and the posh Pureblood accent, left Harry little doubt of who he was speaking to, "Lucius Malfoy, I presume?”
Harry said with a tinge of loathing in his voice. The man offered a sarcastic bow, “At your service, for what little of your life is left. Do you have any idea what you’ve done, by winning the Tri-Wizard tournament? Do you have any idea of the role in history you are about to play?”
The thought of the violent things he was going to do to the Malfoy senior was the only thing that stilled his tongue. Instead he just stared at the man, and waited for him to continue his monologue.
“You poor poor boy. I wish I could tell you that this will be quick, but-”
“Enough, Lucius.” A man with a much deeper voice said, “We have work to do.”
The blonde offered Harry an apologetic, condescending smile, “Of course, I was just trying to allow our guest to enjoy his final moments. No longer.”
The Death Eater with the deeper voice raised his wand towards his face and removed the mask, displaying a grizzly man, with wild unkept long facial hair. The man moved toward Harry with a blade in his hands, and the teens eyes widened, wondering if he was about to be gutted.
“They will not kill you, Harry. I would have wanted to finish you myself. Endure…survive.” Harry recalled Tom’s words, and fought against every instinct that said to fight back. A cauldron was bubbling nearby, and the crypt was lit in the background indicating that more Death Eaters could still be around.
The man mumbled, “Blood of the enemy, forcibly taken.”
With a swift, almost practiced flick of the ornate, silver-bladed knife, a crimson line bloomed across Harry’s forearm. It was a mirror image, almost eerily precise, of the wound he had inflicted upon Fleur just moments prior, a chilling echo of his own malicious acts. A guttural grunt of pain tore from Harry’s throat, a raw, involuntary sound that was quickly followed by a defiant act: he spat onto the face of the Death Eater who held him captive. The spittle landed with a wet smack on the dark robes, a grotesque badge of defiance.
In response, the Death Eater’s wand, tipped with a sickly blue light, snapped upwards, aimed menacingly at Harry’s chest. Simultaneously, the embrace of the scythe, wielded by the sentinel of the Riddles grave, tightened its hold around Harry’s arms and upper chest, crushing him with a relentless pressure. A deeper, more profound groan of pain escaped him this time, a sound of true suffering as his lungs struggled for air and his very bones protested the unbearable squeeze. The air crackled with a cruel tension, a palpable sense of imminent danger hanging heavy in the dusty, oppressive atmosphere.
In the oppressive silence of the graveyard, a new figure emerged from the crypt. Harry's gaze, though, was blurred with pain barely able to make out a suspect. This was not just another masked Death Eater; this one carried a burden, a chilling offering. Cradled in his arms was a creature that defied easy categorization – pale, almost translucent, with the unsettling semblance of a small, malformed human. Its eyes, if it had them open, were lost to Harry's sight, but the sheer unnaturalness of its form sent a fresh wave of dread through him.
The newcomer moved with an eerie grace, his black robes a stark contrast to the sickly glow now emanating from the cauldron. The foul concoction within had deepened to a putrid, churning grey, its surface roiling with unseen energies. It was a sight that promised nothing but malevolence.
From beside Harry, the Death Eater who had inflicted the wound, the one whose knife had sliced through his flesh with such cruel efficiency, growled, the sound cutting through the night air like a viper's strike. “Do it now,” he commanded, his voice a low, urgent rasp, laced with a terrifying anticipation. The words were not a request, but an imperative, a dark decree that hung heavy in the air, signaling the start of their macabre ritual. Harry braced himself, his heart hammering against his ribs, for whatever new horror was about to unfold.
The graveyard seemed to become a darker place, as if the world knew the type of magic that was about to be performed as the air hummed with an insidious energy. Harry watched as the grotesque humanoid creature, a twisted mockery of life, was heaved over the rim and plunged into the bubbling, viscous liquid. A sickening hiss filled the air. The Death Eater, his face contorted in a mask of grim determination, stepped forward, his eyes fixed on the seething concoction.
With a deliberate, ritualistic movement, the grizzled faced man raised the blood that had cut Harry above the cauldron, allowing a single, crimson droplet to well up. He flicked the droplet into the cauldron, and the already turbulent surface erupted, sending shimmering tendrils of fog to erupt over the cauldron.
Low, guttural incantations rumbled from Death Eater’s throat. The air grew heavy, thick with the scent of ozone and something far more sinister, a metallic tang that spoke of blood and sacrifice. As the final inaudible word passed his lips the Death Eater’s expression hardened. Without a moment’s hesitation, he raised the blade that had cut Harry into the air and brought the blade down, severing his own hand with a sickening crunch. A raw, guttural roar of agony tore from his throat, a sound that spoke of pain beyond measure, yet even in that moment of agony, his gaze remained fixed on the cauldron, his other hand clenching into a fist, blood still dripping from the stump of his wrist, “The Dark Lord shall rise, AGAIN!”
Knowing that the time had come, Harry bit down on his tongue hard, the metallic tang of his own blood filling his mouth. Crimson erupted, gribbling down his chin and staining the front of his robes a morbid, dark hue. The sharp, searing pain was a necessary sacrifice, a brutal signal he hoped would make it to Tom. With the locket of Slytherin hanging heavily around his neck, a weight that vibrated with magic, he knew Tom's magic would soon pinpoint his location. Harry's blood, a raw and desperate offering, would be the unmistakable beacon, the siren call of despair that would alert his mentor to his precarious presence. It was a gamble, but so far Tom’s plan had gone flawlessly. He could only pray Tom would reach him in time.
The locket, usually a cool weight against his chest, now pulsed with an insistent warmth, a silent promise of comfort, a desperate reassurance that his mentor was on his way. But the comforting heat was a sensation lost to Harry, his senses overwhelmed by the rising tide of horror that threatened to drown him. The cauldron, a vessel of sinister magic, had not merely burned away, but had seemingly been consumed by the very darkness it had contained. In its place, where a grotesque, nascent form had once writhed, now stood a figure of unnatural growth.
It was no longer a mere humanoid, but a towering presence, reaching the full height of a man, its proportions disturbingly regular yet undeniably monstrous. Its skin was a sickly, deathly pale, an almost luminous white that seemed to drink the light from the air around it. Where a nose should have been, there was only a flattened indentation, two thin slits marring the otherwise smooth expanse of its face, breathing holes for a creature that defied natural order. Its scalp was bare, a stark, featureless expanse, devoid of even the suggestion of hair. Those unnervingly pale hands, mirroring the ghastly hue of its skin, slowly, deliberately, rose to touch its face, a gesture of almost human contemplation that made the scene all the more chilling.
Then, with a slow, deliberate unveiling, its eyes opened. And in that moment, two red eyes opened, and focused their chilling gaze upon him, Harry felt a fear he had not felt since the Chamber of Secrets. It was a cold, creeping dread that coiled in his gut, a stark realization that perhaps, just perhaps, they had catastrophically miscalculated. Their meticulously crafted plan, so carefully laid out, so confidently executed, now seemed a fragile illusion in the face of this unforeseen terror. The air crackled with an oppressive energy, a palpable sense of ancient evil awakening, and Harry’s breath hitched in his throat, the metallic taste of fear coating his tongue.
Voldemort spoke, and his voice was closer to Tom’s than Harry was comfortable with, “Your wand, Augustus.”
The Death Eater offered a deep bow, before handing a dark black wand over to the crimson eyed man. Voldemort eyed it with approval, before grabbing onto the Death Eater before him roughly, and yanking his arm out in front of him. With an easy wave the sleeve around the man’s robe dissolved and the Dark Mark in its sickly inky black nature was fully alive now as the demon-like man pressed down on it heavily.
Moments passed, but then the sky above darkened, and black shadows began falling down from the sky, and as they touched the ground they took the place of many men who each donned the Death Eater garb. Voldemort looked pleased by the arrival, a sinister smile gracing his features, or at least Harry thought that’s what the man was doing, “13 years it’s been, and yet you all stand before as if it were yesterday.”
One of the men, stepped forward, “We are proud to stand amongst you again, my lord.”
“Proud?” The man questioned, “My most faithful, tells me he was greeted more with fear than pride as he told each of you of my impending return. Even from those who helped bring this moment to life tonight.”
Lucius Malfoy looked distinctly uncomfortable by the words, and he moved to speak for himself, “I beg your forgiveness my lord. When Barty approached me, I thought he had gone mad. Years of Azakaban having deteriorated his mind…Did I not prove loyal however, when it was confirmed you were…alive.”
“Did you come out of fear? Or loyalty?” The man asked with something Harry recognized as amusement.
Lucius squirmed, fell to a knee, “Loyalty, my lord. I even used every connection I had to see Augustus secretly released from Azakaban. I am uncertain if we would’ve been successful without him.”
While Harry recognized the Dark Lord's amusement from having spent so much time with Tom, it was clear Lucius was worried that the next thing he would see is the greenlight of the killing curse. The man was practically shaking, and Voldemort tutted, “Yes, it seems my followers have proven themselves these past months. You will all be rewarded, but first, Augustus, your arm.”
Harry's gaze fixed on the grizzly man who could only be Augustus Rookwood. Barty had once spoken of the man’s brilliance, and the teen watched, his face a stoic mask that betrayed no hint of the unimaginable pain he must have endured, extending his arm. The sight of it sent a shiver down Harry's spine – a grisly stump, cauterized by Rookwood's own desperate magical efforts, a testament to the sacrifice he committed to bring his lord back.
Fascination, morbid and unsettling, warred with a deep-seated revulsion within Harry as he watched Voldemort trace an intricate pattern over the mangled flesh. A faint, ethereal glow emanated from the wand, a sickly yellow light that seemed to pulse with a malignant energy.
Then, as if drawn from the very fabric of the surrounding darkness, a shimmering, molten silver began to coalesce at the point of contact. It wasn't merely a new hand, but something far more intricate, more sinister in its perfection. Slowly, agonizingly, the silver flowed and solidified, mirroring the lines and contours of a human hand, each joint, each finger, each nail forming with an unsettling precision. It was a grotesque miracle, a testament to Voldemort's mastery over the Dark Arts, a chilling display of power that defied the very laws of nature. The new silver hand gleamed in the dim light, a stark, metallic counterpoint to Rookwood's grim countenance, a permanent, chilling reminder of the price of loyalty to the Dark Lord.
“Thank you, my lord.” The man mumbled.
“Loyalty is always rewarded when you are in the service of Lord Voldemort.” The man said with a sickly smile.
Harry’s nerves began to fray, stretching taut like a bowstring about to snap, the moment the resurrected Dark Lord turned his vacant, crimson eyes directly upon him. A cold dread, sharper than any blade, pierced through Harry’s carefully constructed composure. Where was Tom? The question screamed in his mind, a frantic, desperate plea echoing through the sudden silence. Every second that ticked by felt like an eternity, each tick a hammer blow against his dwindling hope. The plan, meticulously crafted and rehearsed, had gone so exquisitely well up until this very moment. What, in the name of Merlin, was delaying the man? Had something gone awry? Or worse, had the resurrection borne unexpected consequences? The myriad of possibilities, each more terrifying than the last, swirled in Harry’s mind, threatening to overwhelm him as Voldemort’s gaze intensified, a predatory glint slowly emerging in those blood-red depths.
“Ah, Harry. I had nearly forgotten you were here. Standing on the bones of my father.” The man swept closer to him, and Harry prayed for intervention, “I’d introduce you, but word has it you’re almost as famous as me. The-Boy-Who-Lived. How lies have fed your legend. Shall I truly divulge what happened that night, 13 years ago?”
Voldemort, his serpentine face contorted in a rare display of frustrated contemplation, pivoted back to his assembled followers. He then elaborated on the fateful night, reliving the moment with an almost tangible sense of bitter disbelief. "It was love.” he continued, a sneer twisting his lips, "You see when dear sweet Lily Potter gave her life for her only son, she provided the ultimate protection." He paused, allowing the gravity of his words to sink in. "I could not even touch him. It was old magic, something I should have foreseen.."
A low murmur rippled through the Death Eaters. Some of them had witnessed the aftermath, the shocking failure of their Lord's most potent curse, but few truly understood the principles behind it.
Voldemort's eyes narrowed, his anger simmering just beneath the surface. "It was a mistake," he finally admitted, the words tasting like ash in his mouth. "But no matter," He spat the last two words as if they were venom. "Things have changed," he concluded, his voice regaining some of its chilling authority, "I can touch him now.”
In a dramatic flare, Harry watched as Voldemort raised up and placed a finger on his scar. Harry grimaced and turned trying to get the man away from him, but the Dark Lord just smiled at his discomfort, before sweeping away, the reaper behind him finally releasing his hold, “Pick up your wand Potter.”
Not knowing where Tom was, and realizing his life was moments away from being in grave danger, he decided it was time to drop the act of the helpless victim. With a non-verbal flick of his wrist his wand sailed to his hand, and raised it towards the Dark Lord. Before a spell could escape his lips, pain, unlike any he had ever felt washed over him. It felt like he was being burned alive, and his knees gave way below him and a scream escaped his lips.
“Those were cheap tricks, Harry Potter! Dumbledore should’ve taught you better!”
The pain stopped, and Harry realized he had just been subjected to the torture curse. Nothing followed, and he glanced up to see Voldemort all but snarling at him a few meters away. Raising to his feet he spat the blood from his mouth saying, “Dumbledore didn’t teach me how to duel, Tom. You have no idea who brought me up in this world. None of you do!”
Voldemort’s eyes narrowed at his words, and Harry didn’t stop there, “You are all going to pay. You are all going to fall before him. Run, while you still can.”
The Dark Lord looked amused by his threats, and the Death Eaters around him cackled with laughter. Voldemort spoke sharply, “I tremble before none, Harry Potter. I bring all those who stand against me to their knees, and make them beg for death!”
Laughing maniacally, Harry just spat more blood on the ground, “I see Barty didn’t tell you the truth either. Of how he escaped. Of how I found my way into the Tri-Wizard tournament. It seems he was playing both sides, and was hoping for a prize. Oh Tom, you really did fall from grace.”
The Dark Lord’s eyes narrowed, and none were laughing now. Harry knew he needed time, so he began to tell the truth, “Duel with me, Tom. The truth will be clear to you. Or perhaps a single spell will show you the truth.”
With a flick of his wand, Harry hissed the words out, his rage and fear powering his darkest art, “Mortis Umbra.”
The shadows coalesced from the tip of his wand, and the shadow entity he summoned for the second time tonight came forth. The shrieks, and inhuman wails clearly disturbed the Death Eaters around the graveyard, but Harry’s eyes remained on Voldemort. His red eyes were wide, and he mouthed the word that Harry knew was, “Impossible.”
Before the shadowy monster could begin attacking those around him, Voldemort snuffed out the beast with a slash of his wand, a whirl of his wrist. Harry didn’t even attempt to continue feeding power into the entity. Instead he smirked, his teeth stained from the blood of biting his lips so hard, “You understand now, don’t you, Tom?”
“How?” The man asked in a sharp hiss.
“The diary.” Harry said simply, “It took the life of Ginny Weasley, and restored you.”
Voldemort’s eyes snapped to his left to where Lucius Malfoy had gone pale, “The diary, my diary, that I entrusted to you?”
Lucius cowered backwards, trying to escape the man, “My lord! I didn’t-”
“Avada Kedavra!” Voldemort roared.
A searing flash of emerald green light erupted from the tip of Voldemort's wand, a malevolent beacon in the deepening darkness of the graveyard. It enveloped the blonde man, before he could even finish his protest, plea, or perhaps, in a final act of desperation, a curse. The cruel magic, swift and absolute, ripped through him, extinguishing his life with a brutal finality.
His once-proud, now-lifeless form was flung backward as if struck by an invisible, colossal fist. It collided with the crumbling headstones, a jarring thud echoing through the eerie silence that followed the spell's discharge. The Death Eaters, a huddle of dark figures cloaked in fear and loyalty, collectively gasped. Their breath hitched in their throats, a ragged, terrified sound that was swallowed by the oppressive air. They stumbled backward, a chaotic ripple of black robes and pale faces, their eyes wide with a mixture of horror and an almost sickening reverence for the furious lord who stood before them. The raw, untamed power emanating from Voldemort was a tangible force, pushing them away, warning them of the dire consequences of disobedience, of failure, of simply being in his terrifying presence. The graveyard, once merely a place of the dead, had become a stage for a chilling display of ultimate, merciless authority.
It was clear to Harry that the man believed him. There was no other explanation. How else would Harry know a spell strictly of the Dark Lord's creation? Harry just shook his head, “He will come for me, my lord.”
The last part was said mockingly, but the furious eyes of the Dark Lord turned to him with amusement, “Is that so? Then where am I? If he cares for you, if I have truly fallen to such weakness, then why am I not here fighting for the one I trained to be great.”
The question was something that had been on Harry’s mind for the last few minutes. There is no reason Tom shouldn’t be here by now. Perhaps he was testing Harry one last time? A final need for proof of his unwavering loyalty. Hoping this was the case Harry offered the man a shrug, “He is around. You did set up very close to our home afterall.”
The chilling realization settled upon the Dark Lord’s crimson eyes as he followed Harry’s gaze. It was undeniably clear now, a stark, undeniable truth: the formidable magical barriers protecting Gaunt Manor, meticulously crafted by Tom’s powerful magic, had proven impenetrable. The Dark Lord, for all his boundless power and malicious intent, was unequivocally barred from entering his own ancestral home.
A flicker of something akin to surprise crossed the Dark Lord's monstrous features, quickly replaced not by the expected fear or frustration, but by a slow, sinister smile that stretched his pale lips. A chilling laugh, low and resonant, rumbled in his chest, a sound that seemed to vibrate through the very air. "So, my little product of the Dark Arts has learned to hide behind skirts, has he?" he mused, his voice a silken purr that nevertheless held a dangerous edge. "A cunning move, I admit. But ultimately, a futile one."
He gestured languidly with a pale, elegant hand, a gesture that encompassed both Harry and the impregnable manor. "You, however, could be my key," he continued, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper that promised both salvation and damnation. "You could take me there, Harry. Through the protections, into the heart of this... sanctuary. From within, I could put an end to this foolishness, this tiresome charade you and your... guardian have been playing."
His eyes, like twin rubies, locked onto Harry’s, a hypnotic gaze that sought to penetrate his very soul. "And from there," he continued, a dangerous softness entering his tone, "since you have proven to be... malleable, and quite adaptable to circumstance, perhaps we can finally reach an accord. A true understanding, Harry Potter. For the first time tonight, you possess a genuine, tangible chance to see tomorrow. A chance to step away from the precipice of oblivion and into a future where your true potential can be realized, free from the shackles of lesser wizards." The offer hung in the air, a poisoned chalice disguised as an opportunity, promising a perilous peace in exchange for an act of unforgivable betrayal.
“My master is the most powerful sorcerer in the world.” Harry said with a scoff, “Your inability to breach his defenses proved that.”
“I was but half a man before tonight!” The Dark Lord roared, “If you will not show me the way, then I will pry it from your mind.”
Harry’s wand shot forward in an explosive burst of power intercepting the spell that came searing in his direction. The impact rocked the graveyard, and Harry didn’t remain idle, as he hissed out several curses in parseltongue. Sickly shades of the dark magic came pouring from his wand, and in desperate moves he weaved spells he recognized around him in between playing offense and defense.
The Death Eaters tried to intervene, but Voldemort immediately roared, “Do nothing, he is mine to finish!”
With a sudden, violent slash of his wand, Voldemort unleashed a torrent of black magic, a tangible wave of sinister energy that surged across the graveyard. It struck Harry with the force of a battering ram, lifting him clean off his feet and propelling him backwards through the air. A searing, agonizing pain ripped through every nerve ending, making him feel as though his very bones were splintering and his flesh was being shredded from his frame. A guttural cry of pure agony tore from his throat. As he hurtled through the air, the world blurring into a dizzying kaleidoscope of dark shapes, a chilling thought, stark and terrifying, pierced through the haze of pain: Is this it? Is this the end? The question hung suspended in the air, a terrifying premonition in the face of such overwhelming power. Soon he felt the Dark Lord lift him to a prone position on his knees, a position he felt he would soon be executed in.
Bracing himself for the soft embrace of death a thunderous pop reached his ears, and then the pain relented. Stunned silence followed, and then he felt a hand pull his arm hard, and he found himself lifted by near inhuman strength, and suddenly he found himself eye to eye with Tom Riddle. The man offered his apprentice a grin, “My apprentice does not belong on his knees.”
“You!” Voldemort all but screamed in rage.
Tom turned his head to the monstrous form of himself, and grimaced, “Me.”
With the bone white wand in his hand he strolled past Harry, clearly positioning himself between his resurrected form and Harry. Clearly the Dark Lord was at a loss for words, while Tom addressed his followers, “Greetings, my slippery friends. What a conundrum we all face tonight.”
Voldemort said nothing, but his eyes narrowed at Tom, and Harry couldn’t help but notice the reverence in which he looked at the wand in his mentor's hands. The grip on Harry’s own wand was impossibly tight, and as he found his bearings, he watched in preparation to strike any Death Eater that might raise their wand towards Tom, yet they all seemed as frozen as the resurrected Dark Lord.
“I know you all see this monster as a version of me, but I assure you, that he is merely a warped form of my previous greatness.” Tom said simply, “What you see before you is a symbol. A symbol of what happens when you foray too deeply in the Dark Arts. It created the monster you see before you.”
Growling Voldemort looked like he might curse the man, but instead, he just watched in preparation. They all knew what was inevitable, but none were anxious to see it started. A fight like this could level a surrounding area, and many could die in the crossfires.
“I offer you the chance of forgiveness now. A chance you all know is never offered among my ranks. I recognize the complexity of this however, and I cannot punish you all for being loyal to a version of me.” His eyes took on a sinister red color, that likely many recognized as he said, “But spurn me now, and I will treat you as Lord Voldemort treats all of his enemies…without mercy.”
Harry waited for any movement, but they all just seemed petrified. Instead of a movement from the Death Eaters, the monstrous version of Tom just clapped sarcastically, “Bravo. Bravo. You have displayed a brash sense of foolishness tonight. Foolishness I did not believe myself capable of. Now you, and your apprentice, will die.”
Smirking, Tom raised his wand, “Harry raise the wards. If any attempt to leave, kill them.”
Upon the command Harry immediately began hissing in parseltongue and his wand set to work on raising the protections around the graveyard. Before he could even begin his second set of incantations however the fight began.
Tom and the monstrous form of Voldemort began dueling in a terrifying blitz of lethal spells, each incantation a flash of deadly light, a whisper of imminent destruction. As Harry finished placing the protections around the graveyard his eyes merely widened at the ferocity of what was occurring before him, and could hardly comprehend the speed at which they exchanged blows. The air crackled with raw magic, humming with an ominous energy that sent shivers down his spine. Bolts of emerald green met crimson red, showering sparks that illuminated their contorted, furious faces. The very ground trembled beneath the force of their power, a testament to the cataclysmic conflict unfolding before him.
The very earth convulsed, a violent tremor that ripped through the ancient graveyard. Gravestones, already leaning with the weight of centuries, toppled and shattered. Freshly dug earth erupted like geysers, spewing forth clods of soil and fragments of bone. The ground tore itself apart with a ferocity that defied natural explanation, the cracks spiderwebbing across the hallowed ground as if some titanic hand was clawing its way from beneath. Harry, bracing himself against the onslaught, knew with a chilling certainty that the nearby muggle village, usually so peaceful and oblivious to the magical world's darker undercurrents, must be experiencing the fallout as a terrifying series of earthquakes. He could almost picture their homes shaking, their windows rattling, their carefully constructed lives momentarily disrupted by the raw, untamed power unleashed in this desolate place. The very air thrummed with a dark energy, a precursor to the cataclysm he feared was about to unfold.
The scene was one of breathtaking, terrifying power. Harry watched, his own senses stretched taut, as the Death Eaters reacted to the duel unfolding before them. A palpable fear, a visceral terror, radiated from them, yet it was meticulously channeled. Each dark wizard, despite their shared dread, had taken it upon themselves to establish a significant, safe distance from the dueling lords. This wasn't merely a flight response; it was a calculated act of self-preservation, a silent acknowledgement of the colossal energies being unleashed.
Many among them were transfixed, their faces a mixture of awe and profound incomprehension. They were witnessing something of immense magnitude, a spectacle of raw magical force that dwarfed any battle they had ever participated in or even imagined. The air crackled with expelled magic, the very ground seeming to hum beneath their feet. Even if their limited understanding prevented them from grasping the full implications of the duel, the sheer, undeniable power radiating from the combatants was enough to hold them spellbound.
Harry, however, understood. He knew the true, terrifying significance of what was unfolding. He knew that the circumstances, the very alignment of power and intent in this specific moment, were likely unique. Throughout magic's long and often bloody history, a history spanning millennia of conflicts, rebellions, and magical confrontations, it was indeed likely that these precise conditions had never been met before. This wasn't just a duel; it was a magical singularity, a clash of the same titan that threatened to reshape the very fabric of their reality, and the Death Eaters, cowering at the periphery, were merely fortunate enough to be unwitting witnesses to a moment that may one day be etched into the annals of magical lore.
The teen had never witnessed Tom engage in combat with such raw, unbridled ferocity. Gone was the theatrical, flamboyant spellcasting he frequently employed against Harry, designed to instill terror and slowly grind him into submission. This was a brutal, relentless barrage of pure, unadulterated dark magic. Curse after curse erupted from Tom's wand, a terrifying symphony of destruction. Each spell was a meticulously crafted instrument of agony and death, engineered to rip flesh from bone, tear souls asunder, liquefy organs, and extinguish life with chilling efficiency. The air crackled with energy, the very ground seeming to recoil from the sheer venom emanating from Tom. This wasn't a duel; it was an execution, a desperate, merciless onslaught that left no room for subtlety or grandstanding.
When two massive spells collided in the middle a blast of power erupted from the middle of the graveyard that pushed Harry backwards, but he fought to stay on his feet. Dust and debris littered the battlefield to the point his eyes could not even find either duelist, but he knew it was over by the lack of spellfire. With a gentle point of his wand, Harry began to dispel all that obscured his vision.
As it cleared there was Tom, standing there heaving for breath, levitating a severed head before his eyes. The man shook his head with disgust, tossed it onto the ground with a flick of his wand in disgust, “Such a waste.”
The monstrous version of Voldemort’s wand was held by Tom and he straightened himself up, walked over to the man Harry knew now was Augustus Rookwood, and offered him the wand with an outstretched hand, “See to it that this wand is never raised in my direction again Augustus.”
The man bowed in deference, “Yes…my lord.”
Tom, his silhouette stark against the smoldering remnants of battle, moved with a languid grace that belied the recent ferocity. He ambled back to the epicenter of the Graveyard, a place now scarred by a gaping maw where the earth had once been whole—a testament to the raw power unleashed. A weariness, deep-seated and profound, etched lines around his eyes, but a triumphant glint still flickered within them. He offered Harry a tired, almost knowing grin over his shoulder, a silent acknowledgment of the crucible they had both endured, before turning his back, his attention now wholly devoted to his assembled followers.
His voice, though weary, carried an almost hypnotic resonance that seemed to ripple through the hushed graveyard, commanding instant attention. "Your devotion to my cause," he began, his gaze sweeping over their expectant faces, each one a canvas of unwavering loyalty, "is an admirable gift, my faithful followers, a precious commodity in these shifting times." A brief pause, weighted with unspoken meaning, allowed his words to sink in. "Yet," he continued, his voice deepening with a quiet intensity, "now you see, with your own eyes, that the monster that rose before you was only a shadow, a fleeting echo of my true greatness, a mere harbinger of the power that truly resides within me." A subtle smile played on his lips, hinting at depths yet unexplored, at reserves of power still untapped. The air crackled with anticipation, a collective breath held, as his followers absorbed the full weight of his pronouncements, their admiration for him only intensifying in the wake of the devastating display they had witnessed.
“Swear yourselves before me, and we will bring forth the greatness that we were on the brink of 13 years ago.” Tom commanded, his voice echoing with an unnerving authority that resonated across the graveyard. The air grew thick with anticipation, the flickering torchlight casting long, dancing shadows across the gaunt faces of the assembled Death Eaters. Without hesitation, as if pulled by an invisible, powerful string, every one of the gathered followers fell to their knees, their bodies trembling with a mixture of fear and fervent devotion. Their heads bowed in abject submission, a silent testament to the absolute power he wielded over them.
The young Dark Lord, a figure of chilling elegance in his dark robes, strolled leisurely past each prostrate form. His eyes, burning with an almost unnatural intensity, swept over them, lingering momentarily on those he knew had wavered in the past, a silent promise of future reckoning. He forced his followers to remain on their knees, heads bowed low, their gazes fixed on the cold stone floor, until he completed a full, deliberate circle around the hushed gathering.
“We will liberate the others, my most faithful, that refused to forsake my name,” he declared, his voice rising, imbued with a venomous sweetness. “They languish in Azkaban, their loyalty a beacon in the darkness of my temporary absence. They will be rewarded beyond their wildest dreams. Their sacrifice will be remembered, their suffering redeemed. All of them.” He paused, his eyes narrowing, a cruel glint appearing in their depths. “All except one.” The unspoken name hung in the air, a chilling harbinger of the fate awaiting those who had dared to defy him, even in his perceived weakness. A shiver ran through the assembled Death Eaters, a stark reminder of the brutal justice that awaited any who crossed the Dark Lord. The atmosphere, already heavy with menace, became almost suffocating.
Tom turned to face his apprentice, “Harry, you are now the youngest Tri-Wizard champion in history. A fitting accolade that belongs to an apprentice of Lord Voldemort, yet you have one last task to accomplish.”
With a bow Harry knew what needed to be done, but before he could leave Tom left one last order, “Bring me his wand, Harry. Do whatever you must.”
“Yes…master.” Harry’s voice a confident murmur, barely audible above the frantic thumping of his own heart. A strange, cold satisfaction settled in his chest, the Death Eaters knew his true identity and his place at Tom’s side.
His arm, though heavy with exhaustion, lifted with a surprising surge of power. The holly and phoenix feather wand, an extension of his will, pointed with unerring precision at the glinting silver of the Tri-Wizard Cup. It lay on the dewy grass, a beacon of triumph, seemingly miles away from where this historical conflict had just taken place.
A faint hum resonated through the air as Harry’s magic coalesced, invisible threads of energy reaching out from the tip of his wand. In a moment that stretched into an eternity, it landed squarely in his outstretched hands, cold and solid, a tangible symbol of his hard-won victory. The weight of it, the cold metallic touch against his skin, was irrefutable proof. As he felt the familiar pull in his naval he realized the impossible, the unthinkable, had been achieved. He, Harry Potter, the Dark Lords Apprentice, had won.
Comments
Beau Brown
A big part of it could be how far apart you read the chapters. It perhaps if you reread the whole thing it would make a lot more sense to you. I only say this because you're the only one that said anything so far. On the fight scenes, I admit it's hard. I've written so many, in this story and in others that they all feel a little redundant. What changes from story to story is the emotion in the fighting. That's why I lean so heavily on it. If you've read my work for a while then you read most of my fight scenes a hundred times. As a writer, I have to grow and do different things to differentiate my stories. I hope that makes sense.
sonicmalibu
The fighting in this story appears to have no structure and is simply used when convenient for plot. Harry is eliminated instantly by Voldemort? Seriously? Even weak canon Harry lasted longer and actually escaped. I’m also kinda getting tired of this single spell carrying so much supposed significance but doing nothing. To sum it up: the fighting always lacks luster and requires descriptives of feelings instead of actions to carry it forward, and there seems to be no baseline for how powerful or skilled Harry is beyond what is convenient in the moment. The actions leading up to this didn’t make much more sense tbh. But the “duel” was so abysmal and sad to watch it overshadowed the rest of the chapter imo.
Beau Brown
LFG!
Deep Tewari
Dayuuuuuuummmmmmmm I’ve been raving about this story in my previous comments but it’s just the gift that keeps on giving, this is so good.
Dave Hal
Now I need more, wayyy more
Beau Brown
Definitely! Canon is about to be shattered over the next 5-10 chapters.
Vrail
Played out about how I expected, though Lucius dying did catch me off guard. Barty will have a lot to answer for after this disaster. Now is when the biggest deviations from Cannon will appear I assume, though we shall see what happens next.
