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Chapter change

🕑 Added 2025-01-26 21:40:05 +0000 UTC

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Lenora

I think it might actually be better if you interleave them. You could start with new POV until his father leaves, then protagonist until drunk fails, then back to new POV, then into the acceptance. That would also let you cut out some of the duplicate views of the fight.

Kynan

I tried but I can only do that in the collection folder (which I've done). It's fine to read them in any order tbh, i think this way just flows better but others will probably feel different

Amari Charles

Is it possible to change the order in which they appear in the list? I read them out of order by accident


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