Patrefans
Kynan from patreon
Kynan patreon

Chapter 307: The Way Forward

🕑 Added 2025-04-24 20:00:13 +0000 UTC

Comments

Carter Swafford

I completely agree. Maybe he does it intentionally, out of some misguided notion of mysteries between chapters released, but it instead feels like instead of knowledge coming naturally and organically, its sorted out into chunks that come all at once and don't really seem to fit the next bits. It's like a mosaic. That might work out well from a top down, in planning, where you say "this chapter will do this" and "that chapter will have that", but the story, in my opinion, should be structured and written on its own, and then broken up into chapters based on how things work best, with chapter lengths varying, and such, though some small changes could be made as long as they didn't mess with the story too much

OriksGaming

This is a much better plan than Ke Yin conceived in the last chapter. The author's habit of making the MC seem incredibly stupid and then completely redefining things in the next chapter or two is very annoying. It would probably help to have a backlog of 20 or so chapters ahead of even Patreon, so inconsistencies can be ironed out properly before release.

Declan Dyson

What you've said about the World Tree Sutra fequiring resources for advancement might be worth adding into one of the earlier chapters. Until now, i had assumed Ke Yin was just avoiding regular cultivation because he was too busy, rather than it simply not providing any benefits.

Rah

Yay

Brandon Lydick

Fair enough


More Creators