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Chapter 331: A Merchant's Last Stand

🕑 Added 2025-05-07 20:00:06 +0000 UTC

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GloinJr

Idk there's already so many disparate elements to this story. Main world, two suns world, and the dying realm. Sometimes the plot just needs to chug along

Gerald Monroe

Pay to win cultivation.

Sparkley Unicorn

In my opinion, most of the tension and emotional weight is being lost due to the time since the last Wei Lin chapter. Maybe add one or two before he makes the climb? Reintroduce Wei Lin and Mei with a couple small fights or motivation or brief dialogue of what they've been up to together while away from our MC. I feel this would make the last couple chapters feel much more impactful and have the tension and suspension you're possibly looking for


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