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Chapter 489: Earth Fist Liu & The Terracotta Guardian Sutra

🕑 Added 2025-08-18 20:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Endgame

It's your story, so do what you want to do. You don't have to pander to a small minority. You don't make excessive different POVs chapters.

Joyeus

It’s a Gundam. A rock Gundam.

E

The side character povs are good. They’re just hard with the serial release structure where everyone is fiending for the next chapter lol. They would feel perfectly fine in a regular book format where you can just go to the next chapter. Either way I feel like the way you did it here with just 1 chapter get caught back up quick and had the second chapter of the day for some plot progression for the fiends

DeadSlime

Wonder if blue sun energy can make the golem sentient independent from Liu?

DeadSlime

I normally enjoy alternative POVs as long as they serve a purpose be it character or world building wise and doesn’t take away from the story. For instance this one only occurs over 1 chapter which I’m fine with and quite enjoyed while raising the stakes. My problems is when we get 6 chapters in a row of Wu Kangming while Ke Yin is in the middle of something interesting. It could have easily be spread over a longer period or occur in flash backs. To be honest the content of those chapters were quite good but it interrupted the flow of the story for me.

AutumnLeaves

I like the workaround!

Jamarr

"Ke Yin's stolen body had been transformed significantly. " - There's no mention of him seeing Ke Yin's vessel beforehand. Seems like they landed near the same sect but neither mentioned having seen the other before the final day. Also as someone who has felt in the past that some of the alternate PoV weren't necessary, this one was good. It showcases Ke Yin's opponent's capability, cultivation style, and personality making it a nice addition. My only issue with alternate PoV is when they don't add anything to the story, but this one was fine.

Munirah Hutchinson

How does he know what happened in morning? Or what Ke Yin's vessel looked like before?


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