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Chapter 6: Consultant (Second Part)

🕑 Added 2022-12-04 15:46:39 +0000 UTC

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Alexander89

Very good questions! I'll answer what I can but some things are just spoilers (and stuff me and my co-writer are still discussing about the background happenings). 1) While Luciano Bradley is disliked by a majority of the Rounds, Clovis was doing a very bad job at governing Area Eleven and that allowed extremist groups, like the Pureblood, to gain influence. The newspaper and the writer of the article that Zofia read were part of said groups, they support Luciano to promote the same kind of distaste for Numbers. The scene is meant to show some of the issues plaguing Japan. 2) At that point, since making Nina forget is not possible, the only option left is to recruit her within Rhodes. And if Nina joins, then keeping the fact Lelouch killed Clovis hidden from Nina would be very hard. Plus, Amiya strongly implied they were the real culprits and Lelouch knows Nina is intelligent enough to understand it. He doesn't like it, but he still tries to spin things in a way that favor him. 3) It's not about ditching the checkup. Notice how Vulcan knows about CC's immortality, it's because the story she heard came from those present when CC revealed that detail. Which of course also included the way she goaded Lelouch into making a contract with her. Plus the fact she disappeared for a while during the battle, only to suddenly reappear with a route to the enemy's commander. It comes off as very shady and manipulative, especially to someone who only heard a second-hand account of the facts. It's nothing truly incriminating, but it's suspicious enough Vulcan decided some precautions were in order once she learned CC started hanging around Ceobe. We wanted to show a possible negative consequence to CC's usual habits.

jacob foti

so I really like this but I have to comment on a few things I find odd first of all the Vampire of Brittania is a weird one to focus on in terms of sullying the name of the knight because while he certainly does that he is also seemingly shunned by the majority of the rounds and military the only reason he can operate like a sociopath is cause he is a knight of the round and thus above judgment by basically anyone but the emperor. Secondly, that last line is super dramatic and cool but it kinda irks me for Lelouch to be so candid about that info especially after learning he can't make Nina forget about it sticks out as super odd for a character like Lelouch who even pre-canon has a bunch of secrets he tells no one for the entirety of the series. Lastly and this one is pretty minor I know your trying to hype up Vulcan and show her protective side but it comes off as super unbalanced because the level of "manipulation" C.C uses at this point basically amounts to offering a snack to help her ditch a checkup I feel this might have worked better either less intense or after C.C had pushed it a bit further


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