Patrefans
Alusion from patreon
Alusion patreon

Chapter Sixty-Four: The Hearing

🕑 Added 2025-04-13 14:31:03 +0000 UTC

Comments

Alusion

I cannot believe I accidentally changed the spelling 🤦🏻‍♀️. I'll go back and get that fixed.

Ria Corvidiva

> Baylee even bringing a nervous-looking Hayley — whose new name fits her amazingly. Not sure if intentional change, but it was spelled Hailey a couple of chapters ago. >self-confidant sentinel who was pulled away from her work for the hearing.” confidant -> confident

Alusion

So, a lot of these points are covered in the next chapter, but I wanted to pop in and clear up a misunderstanding. Serena isn't using the lawyer her grandfather hired; in fact, while she is the subject of this case, she is neither the Plaintiff nor the Defendent. (Think of it like a court case between two parents trying to get custody of a child; the child doesn't get a lawyer themselves.) So, in fact, neither lawyer is actually looking out for Serena — although, arguably, both of them are in different ways. Brooks is working for Serena's grandfather, who pays his bills, and Nakamura is representing the Shinara GDF Branch. As this is the case, Serena is treated more as a witness in this trial than an actual participant, and thus, any undue attempt to influence her testimony would be considered witness tampering. Preparing a witness is allowed, but coaching one certainly is not. What her grandfather's lawyer did for her father is edging that line — underhanded tactics coming into play — but Nakamura attempting to coach Serena in any way would play right into Brooks's narrative of the Shinara GDF Branch manipulating her. His doing that could get the case called immediately in Brooks's favor. This is my understanding, anyway. I don't have a law degree, but I'm doing my best to keep this as accurate and interesting as possible. ❤️

Blackjack

Tbh, I have gripes with this chapter. For one, I don't understand why she would be using a lawyer her grandfather hired. While a lawyer technically should only represent the cause of their client, it's hard to say, given the stakes, that the grandfather wouldn't try anything underhanded in this case. Considering all the money she makes, she shouldve picked her own. Case in point, I don't see how Serena hasn't been coached by her lawyer. The lawyer should've been training her in how to respond to these questions. Yet she went in and got completely blindsided & unprepared. It's difficult to provide compelling reasoning for both sides of an issue. Especially if it's a cause they didn't believe in. We knew the arguments that they would use against Serena, and her clearly not being prepared or having thought of anything to counter argue it. This was...a bit disappointing. Again, i understand the point of having this be overwhelming for Serena, and the tension increasing as she's losing her case. But she still should've been prepared beforehand. I guess we shall see how her lawywer does on rebuttal.


More Creators