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Interlude Twelve: On the Side of Humanity

🕑 Added 2025-05-09 23:35:53 +0000 UTC

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phantom

I agree. She has a great point about the Volcora not being able to go above A rank. however that is making two big assumptions. 1: that the Volcora sent anyone equal to the Nine. 2: that the limitation will remain. Likely the matter is that the world can't sustain someone over A rank as it is now. The chances however that will remain after the merge is pretty much none existent. Someone like the member we are familiar with now would never accept lowering herself down to only as strong as the rabble among centurian. There might be a temporary weakness. but even then they would account for this and plan a bunch of things to defend themselves. Though that might be the purpose of having a stronghold. Creating a safe haven for a point they are temporarily weakened.

Metal(Liz)ard🏳️‍⚧️

Now this is real fun 3 way war being waged with serena smack in the middle. The A ranks are totally gonna find out threatening the children of their nominal allies and planned cold war partner is maybe a bad idea lol

Ria Corvidiva

“You can’t feel it now that you’re A Rank, right, Audrey? I think this should be 'can feel it'. Or the word 'right' should be removed, if this is Nightsong saying 'You can't feel it even now that you're A-Rank?" > We think that the peak of human power, the A Rank sentinels, and the peak of Centurion and Volcora power, their ancient monsters will be equalized after the convergence.” I would change some of these commas to em-dashes to clarify a bit: "We think that the peak of human power— the A Rank sentinels— and the peak of Centurion and Volcora power— their ancient monsters— will be equalized after the convergence.” > The Nine have this city in a vice grip vice -> vise Also, Nightsong's given name changes from Kira to Kyra halfway through the chapter. I'm not sure which is intended, but I think Kira looks a bit closer to a given Japanese name, so I'd go with that. >Stars, maybe even our families, will be second comma can be removed. > Kyane grimaces, Kyane -> Kayne > Impressively, Dancer earned her sentinel title while still only C Rank, No grammatical flaws, but uh, just feel the need to point out that Serena got her title while still at E-1, so... I guess this is just one more way she's, as Audrey would put it, a 'special cookie'?

Ria Corvidiva

I remain... Thoroughly unconvinced that the A-Rank council is on the side of humanity. Oh, sure, they say they are; stars above, they probably even believe it. They make good points. The Nine are about as trustworthy as the Volcora Overlord from the Reavers' hideout. But if they get what they want, it still involves their little council serving as the nominal rulers of the world, if only from behind the shadows. In the long run, is rule by the A-Ranks any better than rule by the Nine or by the Volcora? In the end, humanity gets no self-determination either way. Loving the perspective shift after showing Nightsong to be (capable of being) a total bastard last chapter, by the way. I continue to read with great interest and excitement <3 <3 <3


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