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Interlude Seventeen: Life Springs Anew - Part Three

🕑 Added 2025-08-30 00:00:59 +0000 UTC

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TheBotler

Slowly catching up!

Alusion

Those corrections are in! Thank you as always for sending them over! I'm really excited for next week too! I always love little adventures with characters you don't normally see together, and we need to see how they are going to fair in the golden forest!

Ria Corvidiva

Huzzah! It's the best part of the week! :rialove: > He just got out of the infirmary, and with the rest of his team out on assignment, he was more than willing to help out. should be 'he had just gotten out' > The young swordsman has been flirting with her relentlessly, and to her surprise, Asumi actually seems interested. No edit corrections here. I'm just a bit surprised; I figured for sure you were setting Troy up with Baylee. > Akari claimed the seat right beside Serena and ran her fingers through the other girl’s silken hair. Should be: "Akari, who had claimed the seat beside Serena, runs her fingers through the other girl's silken hair." (To correct tense. It's a bit wonky since the claiming of the seat happened in the past, but the running her fingers through her girlfriend's hair is happening in the present.) > Liora gently nudges her nose into Akari’s side, offering her quite support. quite -> quiet > With her head lowered and her hands covering her face, no one notices the tick tears dripping down to wet Serena’s soft hair. The damn holding back Akari’s emotions breaks, and she lets all of it out. tick -> thick and damn -> dam And alas, the chapter is done. Another great one, and now I weep for another week until the next one is ready. :riacry:


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