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Dating Rules And Pretty Fools - Ch. 8

🕑 Added 2023-06-04 18:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Laura S. Fox

I truly wanted to write a character who goes into certain sexual practices before even hearing about them or being interested before, just based on some 'completely nude', let's call them, reactions. As for Jackie, I'm reserving my right to use him as my trump card :)

Laura S. Fox

All of it is intentional :) And I'm happy that you're enjoying the development between Otis and Hudson. I do believe they will progress beautifully. As for Jasper's situation, it's pretty essential to the plot, as well as is Jackie! Nothing left to chance, me likes to think!

Jayce

Otis, despite being naive, is drawn to BDSM paraphernalia. Everyone has imperfections, so Otis should not worry too much about the size of one eye resulting from an accident. Clearly, he is quite attractive as multiple characters have commented on his beauty. A nude Otis wearing a choker was too much for Hudson causing lust to appear in his eyes. Otis is becoming more assertive in his interactions with Hudson, but Hudson has competition as Otis, based on naïveté, appears to be walking into a trafficking trap. Watkins is slimy, and I love it. He represents a solid antagonist. Jackie is less clear, but he actively traffics cargo. He nonchalantly admitted to Otis that he was busy trafficking people. Jackie wants Otis to be part of his cargo for trafficking. He will likely receive a big bonus for obtaining Otis.

Justagirl

Love it! Otis has more guts to ask for what he wants, than I expected and Hudson seems to have a good measure of him to take and give, what they both want and need. So feeling the gentle yet solid start of their Dom/sub relationship. Time for Otis to start believing how beautiful and desirable he is and I’ve no doubt Hudson will help ensure he gets there! Mr Watkins and his “business” keep giving me all manner of creepy “run away fast and don’t look back” vibes. At contrast to him, my heart breaks for Jasper stuck in his clutches… Hudson can’t rescue him soon enough. I can’t get a read on Jackie and finding him and his role, to be very intriguing. Will enjoy seeing what his true nature is. So looking forward to what is going to happen next between Hudson and his beautiful neighbour!! 😊🔥


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