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Dating Rules And Pretty Fools - Ch. 2

🕑 Added 2023-04-23 17:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Laura S. Fox

Thank you for the awesome comment! Yes, I intend to have plenty of intrigue in this story, and the possibilities... yes, they are many :)

Laura S. Fox

There are certain reasons why Otis is like this, and things from his past will be revealed slowly. Hudson definitely didn't expect getting involved with an airhead neighbor, but fate just happens :) Thank you for your comment, Jayce!

Justagirl

100% in for the ride! Otis is too innocent and unawares for his own good. Thankfully Hudson and Missy don’t seem to share these same traits. Jackie screams dodgy! And that slimeball who visited Hudson? Two suspicious characters right out of the gates! Just a matter of time before one or both get their hooks into the unsuspecting Otis. Shudder. Hudson might not be looking to give dating advice or worry about his cute airhead neighbor but I’m guessing he’ll be forced to do at least one of these 😏 Or maybe create a fake relationship to keep the wolves at bay and protect Otis from these men…and his own oblivious self. Love how it feels this story could fly off in a myriad of different directions!! Woohoo ☺️😁

Jayce

Otis is very naive being completely unaware of his surroundings. Of course, he does not know that Hudson is an investigator, so tracking him will not be easy. Despite being shy, Otis is blunt and direct. It appears that his social avoidance and aloofness signifies the reason for his lack of dating success not appearance. Fearing that his cover would be blown, Hudson had to remove Otis hastily from his base of operation. I really like that the shadowy elements are being introduced in early chapters. This story is intriguing.


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