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Dating Rules And Pretty Fools - Ch. 6

🕑 Added 2023-05-21 17:59:01 +0000 UTC

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Laura S. Fox

Thank you for the comment, Ken. Yes, that is an accurate description of Otis, and the specifics of his background, as well as his native intelligence, will play an important role during key moments of the story. I'm happy someone recalls Fist to the Heart! It feels like I wrote that story ages ago. And being too literal is not always a bad thing :)

Ken Pilcher

You excel at painting quirky, complicated characters that defy expectations. I could tell from the start there is a wealth to learn about Hudson and Otis. Of the latter, I know you’ve indicated he’s not specifically on the spectrum, clearly naivety mixed with abuse has narrowed an already insular world view. Looking forward to seeing his obvious Intelligence put to use. For some reason, it reminds me vaguely of Johnny and Raslan, mixed with Matty. Albeit, Raslan is more worldly and far less naive and circumstances have allowed Matty to develop far more healthily than Otis, so far. We are still in a similarly dangerous world Snake and Pretty would recognize. I do want to yell at Otis (as Bugs Bunny): “Stop being so danged literal.” But I tend to be too literal, myself.

Laura S. Fox

I wanted to write such characters for a long time, and now I have the chance to explore them at length :)

Wishful Thinking

I am so loving this so far. Both Otis and Hudson seem like really good guys who have been through a lot and need that someone special to be there for them.


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